I quickly made my way into the house and locked the door behind me. The first item my agenda was a nice, hot shower. I was so sore that hot water sounded amazing, and I had just spent the better part of the last 36 hours with my face stuck in Tamara's ass. It would take a lot of scrubbing to feel clean again.
I looked myself in the mirror. I looked pretty rough. My hair was a tangled mess, and I had dirt all over my body. I felt dirty, and not just physically, but emotionally and mentally. I felt so violated. I hadn't done anything to her that warranted way she'd treated me. I must have underestimated the toll my teasing had taken on her and not just by a little.
As water poured over my skin, I tried not think about the weekend. But I couldn't help it. I broke down and started crying again. I still didn't feel safe. Even though I'd more than fulfilled the punishment she'd demanded, she had mentioned more punishment after what'd happened the car. I didn't know what to do. There was no proof of anything she'd done, and there was no one who would believe me. The police wouldn't be able do anything, but what could they even do? Krista could stop hanging out with Tamara, but it wouldn't stop her if she was determined enough to find me. I was too embarrassed to admit to Krista what happened anyway. She might just think it was my own perverted fantasy.
I sighed and stepped out the shower. I tossed on a robe and headed to the kitchen. I'd forgotten how hungry I was. I devoured some leftover pizza and continued to ponder my dilemma. About the only solution I could think of was just never leave Krista's side, but that wasn't a realistic solution. I finished up and got ready bed. I was so exhausted. I'd slept awfully the previous night, and that car ride was a particularly draining experience. I was so stiff and sore, I just wanted to lie down and stretch out in my big, comfy bed.
I finally collapsed onto my mattress. I hoped a good night's sleep would clear my head. All I knew for sure was I would do almost anything to never see Tamara again. My dreams were no guarantee, but at least for tonight, I could rest confidently knowing that I was safe in my bed. I was safe... wasn't I?
To be continued...
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Thanks to all for your latest feedback! I got some great ideas that made it into this chapter. I'm very excited to see where this story goes next.
I'm looking forward to hearing what you think of the latest chapter. I spend a lot of time thinking about the story, reading and re-reading it, ironing out plot holes, and generally trying to create a steamy story. So, it means a lot to know you enjoy my effort, in particular, I love knowing which scenes appealed most to you or which types of scenes you'd like to see more of.
I'd also love to have some female insight into my story/direction. Don't hold back!
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I cant wait till the next part! :) Maybe some scat action?
This was really hot.
I can't wait until Tamara finally make Sarah lick her ass, and maybe her pussy too?
awesome
what i wanna see is more of the shrunken stuff
Great Addition
Didn't see some parts coming!
I enjoyed it very much. Everything was exciting, especially the tent scene for me.
I'm drawn to this story for its creative ideas. There is a great balance between naughtiness and feasibility. Tamera is very playful while still wanting such cruel revenge? For me that is usually hard to portray, I guess it's not for this story!
Looking forward to the next chapters. Keep up the good work.more...
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I appreciate the feedback so far. Without giving anything away, I do want to reassure those who have stuck with the story thus far. This endeavor is certainly turning into a lengthier process than I expected starting out. I've taken some time building a story around my characters while trying to keep it hot at the same time. However, rest assured things will continue to escalate.
I don't know precisely where things will end up, but there are places I definitely want this story to go. I'm as anxious as the rest of you for this story to pick up the pace. ;-)
Just bear with me a little bit longer. There are good things coming in the next chapter or two.more...
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