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Common sense told him that to use his real name would be a mistake. He set up a new email identity and then registered himself on the site. Looking through the comments on the story, he realised she ignored all messages except those as strong as the story itself. He knew he couldn't write a comment like that, he could never be that vitriolic. Maybe her pride was the key, if he wrote criticising her writing style that might bring forth an answer, but he'd need to be subtle. After much deliberation, he finally wrote:
KillerBitch,
I read your latest story with interest. I felt however that you struggle with some of the descriptions, and your use of passive sentences left the writing poorer. If you would like I could help by editing your stories before they are published.
Regards
Carebear22
He could only hope she'd respond.
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