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"Baby Doll, this is the best gift any father could ever have received for his Birthday." This will be with me always, and I hope you will look on this as a learning experience. "I will love you always."
That is something nobody will ever take away from me. He also says he loves this woman here, as Karl touch my smiling face. I think any woman who would wait ten years for a man to fuck her, has got to be worth more than just a piece of ass, he says to me. So if you would like Sue, we can Change your last name to Clark. "I leaned over grabbed his neck, kissed him like we were a couple of teenagers on a wild date."
"Yes I said to him," then I whispered: we for got about Lois' ass. Lets make a wish, as we each grabbed a leg. Karl and I lifted her ass straight up into the air, and started licking her asshole, and rubbing her clitoris at the same time.
"Oh my god.... Oh my god.... Oh my god.... what a family this is going to be, Oh my god..."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 7 years agoUgh!! I literally could not read it! What is up with the totally screwed up usage of quotations?!? I won't even start on tense... Anyway, couldn't make it past the first page, even though I was trying...
olderman66about 11 years agoI wish this had been my daughter as I came for every page and sometimes twice.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoHot story line, I think. Great physical descriptions and action, I guess. But man, like the others before me have said, you seriously need to edit and proofread. I had no idea who was talking at times. Switching from first to third person and back all the time, lousy use of quotation marks, poor sentence structure and spelling -- jeez, man, did you want us to understand your story or not? This could have been a definite top-marks story, but, sorry, you blew it.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoIt was deliciously nasty and oddly sweet, but it needs some serious editing and the pov needs checking.
