Almost involuntary he said wow 3 times. And laughed and smiled a huge smile as Abbey snuggled up to him with her breasts laying on his chest and arm.
He slipped his arm under her and kissed her forehead gently and said, "This Is Going To Be Incredible." firmly stating each word. He gently rubbed his sister's nipple through the nylon fabric, enjoying memories of rubbing her nipples years ago.
She rested her hand on his big cock, wrapping her fingers around it. She smiled and closed her eyes she knew he was right.
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Rushed
This one felt rushed, as if we had to get some action started RIGHT NOW. Aside from continued need of a proof reader. Solid 3, but that's for your characters. I gave first chapter a 4.
Proof reading
Try getting someone to proof read for you. wrong words, misspelled words and continuity meant the flow was shit. Get it together, a few hot passages do not make a good story. Your premise was good but everything wrong ruined it.more...
Yes, very seductive and hot - shows how horny his sister is for her brother and once her brother let his defenses down; they went at it. I hope in the next chapter; they screw each other hard and slow plus like their new arrangement. They love each other too. Very good story. Thanks !!more...
not bad
solid three
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