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After he finished he pulled out and laid down beside me. I stayed on my stomach for a few minutes. My legs were shaking after the fact and I was just trying to calm them down. He looked over at me and started to rub my back. I looked at the clock, and it was nearly 430 in the morning. I had to be at work at 9.
- COMMENTS
Onekajunover 12 years agoI really enjoyed reading this story. The characters connected well and it seemed real. I like to emerse myself into the characters so you did a great job describing them. The story was sexy without going overboard with sex, which is a good thing!
Yeah you had some spelling errors...people will get over it. By the way checked out your profile...YOUR HOT! :-)
As others have pointed out, good start.
Farmstud30over 12 years agoLike others have said, check for errors or get an editor. The story sounded down to earth. I wondered what her thoughts were about getting pregnant, that was why she didn't want to hook up with a guy at the club but yet her brother came in her.
bluewillybluealmost 13 years agoSolid stories, yes you have some spelling errors but otherwise you are off to a great start, don't let unnamed commentors get you down...
2275jralmost 13 years agoawesome very hot horny story, reading this was very exciting love the writing brilliant cant wait to read the next part . but for sure i would love more of your fantastic stories. dancing the night away:
