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"I know, but could you live with yourself knowing you killed a man for some stupid title." Passion asked once again reaching for him.
"He said things about you that only I should know, for the same stupid title he would have killed me and you would have stood back. I'm not dumb and I won't beg. You are free to do whatever you want with your life but don't come near me." Joshua said his fingers digging into the rugged bark of the tree as he dragged himself up off the floor.
Materialising at his side was Marie with a bundle of clothes. "Come on Joshua, let me take you home." She said propping Joshua up with her shoulder.
Passion hissed as they walked away and allowed the tears to fall.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoI tried giving her a chance but under no circumstances was what she did acceptable.....not done.....welll I am done
Anonymousover 8 years agoNo offense but your writing is both unrealistic and stupid. You make it a chore for your readers... Seriously at this point I'm not even rooting for anyone because of how stupid you made your characters act. This wishywashy bullshit is annoying and your throwing it in there for the sake of drama. It makes no sense. None. U expect us to be torn with passion between Joshua and or the sand valley alpha but u didn't give any reason why we should care about them. No background story no development for the sand valley . Your just making passion look like a stupid indecisive whore rather than the badass hunter/warrior that she was supposed to be. Make up ur fucking mind... I'll read one more chapter but Jesus christ
Anonymousover 11 years agoidiot girl who cant make up her mind. he better end up with marie. she has more brains and brawn.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoHow this can end well is beyond me...
