Dead Stick Ch. 01

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Pars001
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Smiling, he gestured and sat, "we've been watching you for a long time, we've also been waiting. You are and were the strongest enforcer, police agent we've ever had, but you lacked something. I don't know, I guess you were a yes man. You followed orders within the law but never beyond, it took this case to break you from it."

"Wait, you've been waiting for me to tell you to kiss my ass?" I replied a wry smile on my face.

"We've been waiting for you to get tired of orders only, not giving them yourself." the elder said. "Now then, if your up to it, we have two new jobs for you, a command position." he said.

"Okay," I said a broad smile on my face, "and the other?"

Coughing a little, the elder blushed, "Oh, a minor detail, my daughter, she's young, only two hundred but she wants to have a baby with you. It seems she has fallen for you, therefore I expect that you will try to impregnate her at least twice a day." It was my turn to cough when she appeared beside him blushing, holy shit! She was twice as gorgeous as my ex wife! Clear skin, long hair, long legs, and what a tight ass! Maybe things were starting to look up for once, at least after the last two centuries. Hey! What can I say always been a sucker for a tight ass.

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 Anonymousover 3 years ago
i'll be blunt

this feels like i'm reading a poorly constructed version of the Dresden files only less sexy,there is no buildup and the sex scenes were stale,without any real passion

 Anonymousover 3 years ago
Great yarn for a first time!

I suggest you have an editor look this over and repost. Really good story line. A bit hard to read at times though because of the errors. Looking forward to reading the rest. Thank you for taking the time to entertain us.

DJ

Timtom12Timtom12almost 4 years ago
Good story,

Shit presentation. Get an editor, you need it.

I still really like the story though. 😁

 Anonymousalmost 4 years ago
brill. love the consept.

title say it all.

 Anonymousalmost 4 years ago
Spit, polish

I wish that you'd employ a proofreader.

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