Seeing his princess's reaction Steve continued licking, nibbling and kissing her feet and soles as his penis started throbbing and twitching inside her warm pussy - signaling the onset of his own climax. Deanna started whimpering as her flailing arms started thrashing around, clutching at the sheets and pillows. Her body bucked as she started convulsing uncontrollably and whatever initial pain there was - well it was a far removed thought now - she was in absolute bliss!
He was finding it increasingly difficult to control himself anymore and he let go of Deanna's feet. Her legs dropped to his sides as Steve then slammed deep into her. Deanna let out a loud howl as her back arched up high and his hands grabbed Deanna by her waist. His large hands almost entirely covered her tiny raised waist as he started pumping into her faster and more forcefully - ramming into her. The room quickly filled up with their primordial screams, grunts and moans.
Steve then hunched over and started kissing Deanna wildly as he bit her cheek, neck and breasts. Trying his best to prolong himself, Steve agonizingly moaned his love for her but knew it was a lost battle. He suddenly reared up as he groaned and roared loudly. Deanna felt his body stiffen as Steve heaved hard, jerked and collapsed on top of her. His penis was exploding deep inside his princess as their orgasmic aftershocks kept their bodies twitching for a bit.
They lay there like that for a while and he started kissing her very tenderly as he caressed her soft cheeks, gently moving her locks away from her face. He couldn't stop telling her how much he loved her and that she was a woman in the truest sense now - she was HIS woman. As they cuddled and talked his penis slipped out of Deanna and she looked down to see the blood stained penis covered with the beautiful cocktail of their juices.
Steve carried Deanna to the bathroom and they showered together as he taught her how to suck him. He came fast and furiously, amply covering her face and breasts. He laughed and told her why when she sucked him earlier, he had to run to the bathroom - Deanna had brought him to the edge that first time and he didn't want to freak her out. He talked her into licking it and she found it sweeter than the pre cum she had tasted earlier as she cleaned his penis with her tongue.
Deanna didn't go out much the rest of the summer - she didn't want to anymore. She had much to learn from the man she loved.
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I am extremely impressed by this, in particular that it is your first published work.
Well done, you will improve the more you write
well done
You have me waiting for more although maybe a different theme would best suit my interest. You have a lot of the ingredients for being a good writer.
Pretty good except ...
You used the word "started" too many times. If you look back at it, most times the word can be deleted. Otherwise, I enjoyed it.
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this was such an erotic read thank u for a beautiful story
"Nothing could have prepared Deanna for that feeling. As Steve's penis entered and started breaking through her hymen, it pained like crazy. With every little thrust of his, her hips instinctively pushed a little away from him and her hands would push against his belly. He grabbed her hands once again and pinned them over her head with his left hand. Then, using his right hand he grabbed his penis - steering it as he pushed through with a long, hard, deliberate and deep thrust till he was inside Deanna completely.
She just wanted to scream but it got stuck in her throat as her eyes popped wide open. Deanna let out this painful long, loud groan and bit down on his shoulder real bad to stop that scream as her hands freed themselves from his grip and her nails dug deep into his back. Steve brought his hands up to hold Deanna's face as he stared deep into his sweetheart's eyes."
the best part the most erotic
thank umore...
my first story here
Hi, First thank you for taking the time to stop by and read...I really appreciate it! I took the plunge to write after reading so many awesome stories here and I hope to contribute more as itime goes by. Most will be picking on experiences of those around me and my own. I would love to collaborate as well or if someone has a theme :). Do let me know what you think and I also hope to make awesome new friends this way! Thanks and enjoy ;)more...
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