- BDSM
- Debra Gers Owned
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Click here"Do you have an apology for me?" Anne asked.
Debra did not know what to say but with some quick thinking she replied. "Thank you Ms Anne for correcting my behaviour."
"You can go home now. I do not want you back until Saturday at noon." Anne said.
"Wear a sun dress with no bra and make sure your butt plug is in."
"Yes Ms Anne" Debra humbly replied.
On the way home, Debra was pleased that her punishment was milder than she thought it would be. One thing she was going to do when she got home was get Mr. Big out and masturbate. She had never been so horny in her live as her pussy was throbbing and her pussy juices were running down her ass.
- COMMENTS
CEK127over 3 years agoI need to be owned by a Ms. Anne of my own! Thank you for the story. You hit upon a few of my hopes and fantasies.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI really liked this story, although it was spoiled by a lack of editing. Yes you should read through your work. I do this by reading the story out loud, with a pencil to highlight the errors. I make the changes and read through again. I may do this 10 to 20 times, making changes as I go until I arrive at something that satisfies me. I then pass it over to a friend to read: sometimes they will find that extra typo or give another suggestion.
Good luck with your writing, and I am looking forward to Debra's further adventures into slavery. I have also given you four stars for a great effort.
mel_pomenealmost 11 years ago... I shall have to assume you made a typo in your title - not the best way to start, debra, even if this is your first story.
As far as it went, it was pretty good and thank you for sharing your writing with us; you really must, however, pay more attention to the presentation of your work; this looks a little sloppy and your story, your readers and you yourself deserve better.
Do read through your work very carefully before submitting it - try to get someone else to read it if you can - and you will be a success here.
Welcome, thank you again and you may have four stars; I am feeling generous.
