Demon Child Ch. 14

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Xantu
Xantu
613 Followers

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Aylanna washed the stain out of the scarf and hung it to dry over the doorway to her tent. Sitting in the afternoon sun she ruthlessly yanked the comb through the tangles in her hair. Finally she stopped and got out the little bronze mirror and peered at the face staring back at her. Clean from washing this morning, her strange demon red hair floated around her face like tongues of flame dancing in the wind. Running her hand across the strange curling tendrils, Aylanna was struck by how soft it was. She repeated one of the new words she had learned today, "Silk."

As usual Kwal'kek was busy about the camp. Aylanna gradually became aware that a contingent of the first year warriors was being assembled under the command of the horse master. The horse herd was being sent ahead. "Move quickly; take them clear through the mountains. We will meet at the Twisted Dagger horse meadows."

The youths were clearly excited to be able to travel quickly, to leave behind the lumbering wagons and ride free and fast across the land. As they vaulted into their saddles, shrilling their ululating war cry, the premonition that their time together was ending, that soon everything was going to change rose up in Aylanna, bringing her to her feet. For just an instant she had this irrational urge to run after them, to somehow delay this parting. Taking a deep breath and firmly taking her emotions under control, she forced herself to smile and wave farewell, thinking to herself that this was not the first or the last of many painful partings she would have in her future. )===(>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<)===(

Thank you for taking the time to read my story.

For those of you new to this story, I have included many words of the Bak language. The meanings of most are easy to determine from context. A ha'akh is the lowest rank of servant to a warrior regiment.

Please do me the kindness of leaving me feedback and comments.

Special thanks to Dani for her wonderful editing help.

Enjoy, xantu

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booknerdbooknerdover 11 years ago
Tollera!

I do hope that Tollera will be mentioned in the chapters to come. I would love to know how she and her daughter fair.

T_WeezyT_Weezyover 11 years ago
Entertaining, not sexy

I very much like the story so far. I should note that I'm not reading it for erotic purposes, as there is very little eroticism in it, but as one would read a regular novel. Let me be clear that I would not have you change this; indeed it would be quite disappointing to lose any part of such a rich storyline. I only mention this because I thought that perhaps it ought to be filed in "non-erotic" or "semi-erotic". Also, there should be a "semi-erotic" tag, if one does not already exist. That last one, of course, is most certainly beyond your control as an author, but it needed to be said nonetheless.

DawnzoDawnzoover 14 years ago
You are Fantastic!!!!

OMG!!! I love all of your stories!!! I think you are one of the best writers on this site

What is NW hunters about?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
I said it before and I'll say it again

yet another great chapter! I wish they were longer....and/or came quicker. I'm definitely not known for my patience. LOL Keep up the great work!

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