Derby Ch. 04

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The girls just stared for a moment in shocked silence. Then Becca said, "There's lettering on his thing. He's got a tattoo on his penis! Ewww! What does it say?"

Jodi felt half sick, but she couldn't stop herself from leaning a little closer so she could read the black ink on the shaft of Derby's penis. "HIV+." Then she saw something in the blood on the bench. There was a broken toy light saber sticking out of his ass.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Redemption

I have trouble with not finishing a story that I've started reading, but this one was making me uncomfortable. You saved it though!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Meh

Lame and boring. Also poorly written, with inconsistent plothe and characterizations.

verbicideverbicideover 7 years ago
Just desserts

Every now and then it's fun to read a story about one of these fictional rapists that ends up getting what he deserves.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
enjoyed until this chapter

I hate vigilante stories. Bat man, Spiderman, and now these twerps. If they would have came forward with their suspicions the police would have investigated. But now they just threw their lives away.

Katwill87@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Backfire?

Your writings started out as a bit of dirty, captivating reading.

Got to quickly hate the main character, glad there was some kind of justice.

But there is a gap in the logic, the guys who did the justice will now be in trouble

with the law. They went a bit far as well with the justice they delivered.

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