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He felt someone pulling at him but he wouldn't be moved.
"Gabriel," he heard Moira insistently at his shoulder bending over him. "Gabriel," she said again when he did not give any indication that he heard her. "We must get her out of those wet clothes."
Gabriel glanced at Moira and then back to Devonny. He laid his warm palm of his hand against her face.
"Gabe," Elijah's hand was on his shoulder. "Let them take care of her. You should change clothes too."
Gabriel nodded his head at this and slowly stood. He allowed Elijah to lead him from the room, glancing back at Devonny before Moira closed the door behind them.
***
Devonny burned. And then she froze. She was sick, she understood. She could hear Moira's voice floating around her and someone's soft masculine murmur. Gabriel? Or was it Eli?
She tried tried to fight through the darkness that enveloped her. She tried to open her mouth to speak but there was nothing only the darkness pulling her down further into its embrace.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoAfter so many 'chapters' this story is just becoming a snooze fest. It takes forever to progress and Devonny and Gabriel's 'romance' is moving slower than molasses. Their tepid relationship is a little reminiscent of Edward and Bella from Twilight with his bad attitude and miniscule charm.
Comentarista82over 8 years ago...got Gabriel out there to rescue her. Seems like this might shake him out of his iceberg? :)
Anonymous_Wordsmithover 14 years agoNote to theDuskyGirl: I understand how busy you are, but I certainly hope you can find time to continue this story soon. Fans of Devonny and Gabriel are all waiting breathlessly.
Ladygameckover 14 years agogreat story, need the next chapter NOW!!
