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Firebrain
Firebrain
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So here we are; the final countdown, the closing credits, the end of the road. The post-orgasmic collapse. It's been an emotional journey and I feel like we've really grown together, you know? Sob, sigh...I'm so proud of you!

Now that I've finished patronising you: I hope this has been of use. I'd love to hear thoughts, ideas and even corrections on this little piece. Just don't send me pictures of your mushroom cock, ok? I get like three of those a week and always when I'm eating a sausage.

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OffRoadDieselOffRoadDiesel5 months ago

This was helpful. I tend to be dialog-heavy in my stories and hear the characters talking to each other in my head. I get tired of, “she said.” or “Allison said.” and prefer something a little more descriptive than “said”. I also like putting the tag at the beginning so the reader knows who is talking when there are multiple characters involved.

Thanks for the tips. 5*

2soon2no2soon2noover 1 year ago

I enjoyed the article and the humor. Thanks. A solid 5.

OnrecessOnrecessover 1 year ago

I wish I had read this sooner. Thank you

WetdirtysmileWetdirtysmileabout 2 years ago

This was very helpful I rate this 5 mushroom heads... err..stars, I mean 5 stars. Thank you!

TransbianWriterTransbianWriterover 2 years ago

This was an awesome read! You can always tell when guides are well written, because they make you laugh :) Thank you for the help and guidance!

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