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Click hereWith everyone now awake and things packed the only person who wasn't present was Dana.
"Where's Dana?" Asked Lauren. Looking around at everyone's faces making sure they didn't know the answer I said.
"I think she went to the bedroom in the middle of the night. The floor was probably making her back worse."
Lauren, making her way to the bedroom opened the door to find a freshly showered and dressed Dana laying in bed sleeping curled up in a ball under the blanket. Waking her up Lauren asked if she was okay to which she responded by nodding her head in silence shaking off her grogginess. Dana, trying to stand wobbled backwards back onto the bed. Concerned, Lauren asked if her back was okay. Dana nodded and just said "yea I'm fine, my legs are just weak and my hips hurt. I had a hard time sleeping and and almost didn't get any." Sneaking a smile my way.
We all loaded into the bus meeting up with friends we haven't seen all summer. Both Dana and I were asked how our summer vacations were, we just looked at each other, laughed and said together in unison.
"It was eventful."
- COMMENTS
mitchawaabout 7 years agoI hand a hard, if you'll pardon the expression, time with the seduction, but believe the sex was incredibly hot.
Jcabooseabout 7 years agoAuthorThank you, these were my first stories. I'm not the best at English for it is my second language, I will do better next time. I thought I changed his name completely. Thank you though for liking and leaving your comment. It will help me edit my next one. Would anyone like to help edit it?
Anonymousabout 7 years agoYou went back and forth between the two names often, so unless his name is James John or John James, then I think you messed up. FYI for any future writings: get the main character's name straight. :) Otherwise, decent story. Though if he was drenched in her juices from squirting, why didn't he just a year least rinse off in the shower as well? Seems something others would smell on him...
The_Watermanabout 7 years agoNicely constructed. I liked your character descriptions. Nice lead in to the sex. I had to suspend reality a bit, but...it is a story, after all. Worth 5 stars!
