I'm numb beyond caring at this point. I remotely hear Susie trying to goad me by saying something about finally getting fucked by a real cock. Only a small part of me is still thinking, desperately trying to figure a way out of this hell.
I feel Susie's hand slide underneath her pussy. I turn my head and look up to see her fingers cover her pussy as Schmidt slides his cock out of her. "Maybe now," I think to myself. "If she will let just one of the straps loose ..."
"I have another surprise for you Jake." Susie teases, looking down at me between her legs. I look up; surely she can see the innocence in my eyes?
She catches me unaware as she suddenly slides backwards and sinks pressing her pussy directly on my mouth. I feel her legs clamp the side of my head.
"Clean me," she orders.
I scream with my lips tightly held together.
"Lick it all out and I'll take pity on you for the rest of the night."
I scream again and try to thrash my head back and forth, my anger beginning to explode.
"Goddamn it Jake! Take your fucking medicine!"
I manage to get my head twisted to the side and take a frantic breath. "Fuck off!" I scream back, the rage now boiling out of me.
Suddenly pain explodes though my body as I feel my balls gripped in Susie's hand.
"Lick my pussy clean Jake and I'll let go of your balls!"
"Fuck off both of you!" I scream in agony.
The pain triples as she squeezes even tighter.
"GODDAMN!" I yell.
"Lick it and we'll move you and the chair outside the bedroom for the rest of the night."
"Fuck YOU!"
I feel her twist. The pain is unbelievable and then it stops. For a brief moment the pain just disappears. Then I see nothing but blackness.
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Could Turn Into A Decent Story
If an ADA and Schmidt both go to prison, this could turn into a fairly decent story. But if they ever let Jake loose, their lives have an extremely short time frame. I am pulling for Jake to kill and bury his wife-turned-whore and the rapist Schmidt.more...
Idiotic!! MINUS 5*!!
She is a ADA??!! Idiotic!! She have to know when he gets free she goes to prison for a long time!! Your fantasy is driven by your lechery or idioty!!!
Bloodchilling Beginning
What a coldhearted and vicious beginning to a great story. Even though I've read this story before, my anger quickly builds as the torture increases and the depth of her betrayal becomes evident; I'm imagining what I would do to that guy if it had been me. I think we can all agree a sound thrashing, whether literally or metaphorically, is in order - bare minimum. But, if I'm honest, I know that just wouldn't be enough for me. Not near enough.
This is a great story, nicely written, unfolds naturally and at the right speed. Great job Winterfoxx, thanks for the entertainment. The only thing I could wish for would be to rain more carnage down on the head of this Schmidt character. Physical carnage. Lots and lots of pain.more...
Second time through...
Still love it. Still five stars. Still a favorite. One of the best. What a screwed up scenario, but written so convincingly.
D.T. IVERSON IN 9-15
used your title in his story Up in Michigan, TK U MLJ LV NV
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