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There were even a couple of lesbians who stepped up to dump on her. Devon was worried she'd cause an ugly scene, but he needn't have worried. She was friendly and flirtatious with them, telling them teasingly they could clean her off someplace private for an extra twenty dollars, and that she liked guys but they were welcome to try to change her mind.
Then she whispered something to the blonde, butch one that made her blush and laugh at the same time. She kissed them both on the lips, then yelled that every guy within a hundred yards owed them all twenty dollars. Neither seemed to mind, any more than they minded the gunk that got on their clothes when she hugged them.
Finally the day was over. Devon lifted her out of the garbage can and made sure to carefully wipe off her face before taking the goggles off. There were bits of carrot stuck here and there and a big sticky spot right on her left butt cheek, and he was frightened to touch her hair. But he couldn't believe how much he was looking forward to the next few weeks, and he almost told her so.
But that wasn't his style. "Come on, Dirty girl," he said gruffly. "Let's get you cleaned up."
- COMMENTS
diggypopabout 13 years agoAuthor...the Viagra myself. Not exactly date rape, but still quite unethical. But then, so is throwing cigarette juice on someone no matter how obnoxious they are.
I have no more problems with characters behaving immorally in erotica than I do in any other area of fiction, but something about the arousal factor sometimes makes me nervous that a character's antisocial actions are getting someone's rocks off in real life.
Sort of like action films portraying violent killers as heroic; it may be just a guilty pleasure but you hate to think someone might see it as ideal.
LunaEroticaMysticaabout 13 years agoMyrtle certainly is a dirty girl and was definitely up for that challenge. My only small quibble was the slipping-of-Viagra-into-her-drink bit. I kept waiting for her to have done something similar to him. I like how she kept control (even with her orgasms) right up until the very end. I realize she was humiliated, but I can't help noticing that he was humiliated in turn (even if didn't realize it). Not that either seemed to mind. He might think he's alpha, but she's a little vixen. ;) You even managed sneak in a blossoming emotional connection. Nice. Goodluck!
~Luna
Dianthusabout 13 years agoI enjoyed the quirkiness of the premise. You wrote the growing awareness of the two of them as people well and believably. Thanks for a good read.
PrincessErinabout 13 years agoA great story with hot sexy sex. A great combination. Good luck in the contest.
RePhilabout 13 years agoReaders need to be in the right frame of mind for this story. You achieved what you were going for in my opinion. Also the writing and vocabulary were outstanding really nice job. You right up there with DQS and JPB writers on this site
