Doctor Does Diesel Ch. 05

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"You gonna talk shit, huh? She's my girl and what I do with her is none of your goddamn business." Diesel yelled. He was no longer drunk, instead he felt all too aware of everything going on around him. Archie was coming toward him, but his approach was eclipsed by that of a burly bouncer who grabbed Diesel by the shirt in an effort to restrain him. With one swift move Diesel had the bouncer in a headlock, and the man clawed at Diesel's clothing, trying to break free.

"Yo, Diesel let him go man, let's get out of here," Archie said when he finally reached him. Diesel released the bouncer and he fell to the floor, coughing and holding his throat. Diesel's eyes searched the club for Madison but she was nowhere to be found.

"Madison!" he yelled barreling through the crowd of people that had formed around the altercation.

"Diesel man, I said let's get out of here, trust that the cops are on their way, she probably headed outside anyway." Archie said grabbing Diesel's arm. As the adrenaline drained from Diesel's body the world lost its clarity and he felt unsteady on his feet. Archie dragged him through the door and out into the warm summer air just in time to see Madison climbing into a taxi, her shoes in hand.

"Madison!" he called out, running up to the cab as it pulled off down the street. "Fuck!" he yelled.

"Come on man, you hear those sirens? Your ass is going to be in jail if we don't get the hell out of here," Archie said. Diesel let Archie lead him to his car and deposit him inside. As they pulled away from the club--passing a trio of wailing police cruisers on their way--he wondered how much damage he'd just done to he and Madison's budding relationship, and he tried not to even entertain the thought that it may not be something they could recover from.

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eliotoneeliotonealmost 2 years ago

This is a rally good story - one gets pulled into the telling of it and the sex is errific!

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Drama

I love the steady build up as the chapters flow into one another.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

holy crap this is so awesome!!!! i cannot wait for more, i really hope diesel doesn't get deployed; not just because of his awesome budding relationship with madison but also because he's really not mentally prepared to go there. he'll die (i'm sure from distraction alone, with being in love with madison and far from her AND the other ghosts he hasn't recovered from yet)

but seriously dread lock dude deserved that beat down. i'm sure madison is scared as heck from diesel's rage.... but don't worry d, you and maddy will overcome this. damnit you better.

more like yesterday! awesome update!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
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That was me at the end of this one! Lol, I am feeling for Diesel but I understand Maddy's fears, Diesel is one scary guy LOL. I hope it all works out in the end though I think she's the one that could really heal this bad boy!

SatisfyableSatisfyablealmost 14 years agoAuthor
Thank you all!!

For the amazing comments, you have no clue how encouraging they are! I apologize if this story isn't as steamy as some of you would've liked, but I had to stay true to the story I was trying to tell...and I promise you won't be disappointed in that aspect in the next installments. Keep reading and keep letting me know what you all think, good or bad!!

Satisfyable

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