Doctor Master Ch. 4 (2)

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The slave is raped at vampire party.
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Coral
Coral
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I am at his party and all are kind. One is looking at me very strange; I need some air."Count Divad, may I go out out in the garden?"

"Yes" I go out into the beautiful garden; I jump, he is behind me."You will be my toy, now, the Count can fuck himself." I push him away; I will not be this one prey start to run; he is to fast. Hitting the ground knock the wind from me, he is tearing my beautiful dress to nothing. The white of his fangs makes my body cold as ice.

He tears into me with his dick. He is fucking me hard and wild. Part wants it stops and the other half is enjoying being raped. He fills me with his seed; he leaves. I can not walk; I crawl back to the house in shame. What will the Count say? I did not ask for it or did I? The Count is waiting for me on the porch."Help me, Master!" Count Divad runs to me; Oh God his eyes. Master lifts me carefully and carries me to his room. Doctor Louis is call from his card game."Divad, what happen to her?"

"She was in the garden and someone hurt her."

"He hurt her; poor Shawney!"

"He will die and I will make it slow and painful." Master Louis examines carefully and says I will have a black eye and broken arm. Oh God Count look like his mad. I do not wish to be his next victim.

I wake the next night with my arm in a cast. Every part of my body hurts. My two masters are sitting by the bed. "Shawney, how are you, my child?"

"I am alright, it is my fault."

"I went outside; I only wished to see the flowers in the garden."

"Did I do wrong?"

"No" both say. The next thing that happen is a man is pushed into the room. "Oh, God " I jump and they know he is the one. Count Divad takes by his arm and I hear it break. Count Divad hits him hard the face."Master Louis, Please stop him; I do not want a life for my shame."

"Divad, Stop, we will do something else." Shawney needs sleep. "And when you are well; the training will start again."

For six months, I am treated like a Queen. I am feeling better each day. Master Louis and Count Divad come into my room. "Your cast will come of tomorrow."

"I will serve you tonight if you wish."

"I am your slave and will obey any commands."

"Shawney, I have one question; how many masters do you have?"

"You are my Master but you told me to obey Count Divad also. "

"Am I wrong?"

"I will stay where I am told to stay and do what I am order."

"But if I go with Master Louis may I come back and see Count Divad."

"But if I stay with Master Divad may I go to see Master Louis."

"You will leave with me, Shawney and you will return to see Count Divad after your training is finished."

"This is the only promise; I will make to you."

"You are learning to obey and I am proud of you," said Master Louis."Shawney, you are the first one, I have learned to love in years," said Count Divad. We leave in the car and the count kisses me good-bye.

Coral
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Your writing sucks!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

None of this makes any sense.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wonderful potential

I really enjoyed the theme, I feel there needs to be a conclusion and that may take further writing and thought, proof reading is needed, maybe from a friend as I don't think Coral has English as a first tongue, i accepted that as I was reading and made allowance. I enjoyed the mind and thoughts behind the story, very much enjoyable

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Penny.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Potentially good, elaboration in need though

I think the story has a lot of potential. The rape scene is not too clear though. Who is the man that did it? What is he like, what does he look like, other than his fangs and that he is quick. Does he hold a grudge against either one of Shawney's Master's, that he would use their property so to anger either of them. I hope the rest of this story is in the other chapters that are not in this section, or so it seems. In and of itself, it is a good story. Oh, and while rewriting, maybe making sure it is correct in grammar and spelling.. makes reading that much easier.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
what the hell......!!!!!!!

this was a compleat waist of time to read ...it started out good but compleatly lost my attention when it broke from the story line u need to rethink and reread your work befor u submit anymore it just didnt make any sense

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