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'and the wedding dress. What was that in aid of?'
She smirks like a child and claps excitedly forgetting we were in a now crowded pub. 'That was the ultimate test. I knew you didn't have such a bridal gown in your old girlfriends clothing museum so you would have to buy one and you did. That took some doing.'
I smiled proudly. 'What did you think?' I asked.
'You looked radiant,' she said but I couldn't get a good view from the pictures so you'll have to wear it for me again when I can persuade you to get married.'
I looked at her shocked and she smiled.
'One step at a time,' she said, 'one step at a time.'
Was it all a dream? Do I accept her plan, how far do I go and does she eventually see me walk up the alter as her bride? You decide.
The end
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 16 years agoyour story is one of self discover and is well done and goes the way one would. Jule and Lucy should be tougher in the end .. the story feels very natural ..
Anonymousover 17 years agoThe story was pretty predictable about half way through, it had some good ideas, but knowing the end, it got a little tedious. The whole meta-physical thing of "you are Julia" was a little heavy for an erotic tale, especially to just throw that in at the end...I think you should drop this and finish the "close shave" story line. Still love your stuff! michelleinmd
Anonymousover 17 years agoFound this story very hard to understand, since it is often unclear who is speaking. Besides, the main character seems to suffer from a serious lack of common sense.
Anonymousover 17 years agogo home by yourself and throw out all of your girlie clothes. Be a man and grow some gonads. Don't let her turn you into her bitch. If you can't see what she is doing, then you are better off living alone the rest of your life. Any conniving woman that will twist you this way and that way, making you into something THEY wand is nothing be a BITCH. As a matter of fact, she is probably a TOP BITCH and wants to use a strap on on you. Now, do you see who wears the pants between the two of you?
