"No." I said. "Why would you ask a thing like that?"
"WE are asking the questions, here!" shouted Muscone. "And your lack of cooperation is more than a little suspicious!"
"I don't know what's going on, here," I replied, "but I'm not playing this game. I want a lawyer before I answer any more questions."
"You're not under arrest." said Muscone.
"So I'm free to go?" I asked.
"After you cooperate with us." said Muscone.
"Then I want a lawyer. Now." I said.
"What's your problem with the Federal Government, asshole?" thundered Muscone. "Are you a White Militia member?"
"Lawyer." I replied simply, looking Muscone right in the eyes. I thought he was about to come over the table and attack me, but Nash put his hand on Muscone's shoulder.
"Jack, he's right." said Nash. "Let's not fuck this up."
Muscone stood up and went to the door, where a Deputy was waiting outside. "Can we get this bastard a lawyer in here?"
"Sorry, sir." said the Deputy. "Night Court is closed on weekends. He can call a lawyer in the morning."
"All right, Nash, come on." said Muscone. He and Nash left. Some minutes later, Ernie came and got me. He led me to a breakroom that had a sofa, and he gave me a blanket.
"Those FBI assholes told me to put you in a cell, but you're not formally under arrest." said Ernie. "I don't know what's going on with those Fed bastards, but I don't like it. You can sleep in here until morning. I'll have to lock the door, but you can knock on it if you have to go to the bathroom."
"Thanks, Ernie." I said. I lay down on the sofa, wrapping the blanket, which reminded me of my old Army blanket, around me. I was freezing cold and could not get warm. I tried to think about what was going on, what I could possibly have done to deserve this scrutiny by the FBI...
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
I must've fallen asleep, but it felt like I was instantly being wakened. "Mr. Troy," said the Deputy Ernie had called Bert. "Wake up, Mr. Troy."
"Wha?!" I asked as I began sitting up, trying to get my wits about me. I felt exhausted and disoriented. Then I looked up and saw that Bert was not alone. An Apple Grove P.D. Officer was with him.
"Leanne!" I said, seeing the woman I'd dated over a decade before, Leanne Wisocky. She was now a Sergeant in the AGPD.
"Hi, Don." said Leanne. "I need you to come with me. I have some bad news for you." I saw her steel herself, then she said "Your parents' house burned down last night, and they were in it. I'm sorry; they're dead."
To be continued.
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The title says it all.
Yes, I was disconcerted at first, but I finally got it.
It's an interesting literary exercise, a side trip in
an alternate universe, a "what if?". Listening to
the title tune by Gary Wright helped.
It's different but well done, as usual.
I'm still a huge fan and have faith...more...
Anonymous! "You just killed it"
With five points pointed against the WW and IC and then to post it as Anonymous who has been an avid reader for years. I for one and I hope WW would have respected your comments more with some ID, so he could answer you. With leaving it as Anon you can as far as I am concerned go find another hole to hide in. The WW with Troy etc will continue quite well without your future input thank you. I know WW would not lower himself to reply to you but then, I can stoop even lower than anyone out there for a good writer.more...
WITH ALL THE WARNINGS AND CHILLS UPON THE MIND
and with his training he still got shafted, TK U MLJ LV NV
The idea is very interesting and I like it
WW does it again and creates a kind of alternative universe, that is interesting in it's scope and how things evolve in light of the reality in the earlier stories.
Await how the story evolves.
Best guess
So Don is in a drug induced interrogation, probably being held by black hats or one kind or another. His constant state of "freezing cold", despite changing external conditions suggest that or something very like that. So does his knowledge of things he had prior to "waking up". Those characters that are "helpful" to him are mental defenses inside the drug/dream. Parts of himself that are subconsciously trying alert him to what is going on, or warn him off of areas of thought/memory that could put him in danger or help the folks that placed in in this drug state.
Not a bad piece. By its nature it is jarring for the readership because it places the false assumption that everything that went before was false and since we "like" what went before (the Iron Crow Bar and such) you are going to get a pretty negative response.
I expect all will be forgiven when Don manages to "wake up" from the forced dream and things are explained. Five stars for effort and originality, regardless of how well the execution was.more...
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