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Click hereAlex lapped the juices on either side of the clit, her fingers back inside and moving slowly in and out. She could feel Beth's clit swelling as she sucked it softly, a hard little button between her soft lips, her fingers continually sliding in and out, in and out. Then her fingers were all the way out and her tongue moved down to the opening. Beth whimpered and humped upward as if to grab Alex's tongue with her cunt. Alex drank her, sucking the juices between her lips, slurping, not caring about the noise she made, her face wet, breathing on the wet cunt, the tip of her tongue flapping against it. Again. Again. Her tongue striking Beth's clit more firmly as Beth squirmed and pushed upward again. Slapping the clit now, slapping it with her tongue, Beth bucking up and down and up again.
With her fingers, Alex pulled at the mound above the clit to get the flesh more exposed. Her tongue rapidly swiped from side to side, and suddenly Beth jerked and started coming, her cunt contracting on Alex's fingers, gripping them, Beth crying out as Alex's lips captured Beth's clit and held it prisoner. Under lock and key. She kept her face pressed against Beth's cunt as Beth continued coming.
* * *
"Let me do you."
"No."
"Oh god."
"What?"
"I hope you're not a damn stone butch. I hate stone butches."
"I'm not that way. I'm too strung out. I came before."
"You did?"
"I came while I was eating you. That never happens to me."
"I'm flattered."
"Don't run away."
"Oh, don't worry about that. I'm not going anywhere."
"Good."
"You're different."
"Different than what? Other women?"
"My last, anyway."
"The one you're always thinking about?"
"Yes. But I'm not thinking about her now. I'm thinking about you."
"I need someone in my life."
Beth sighed, pressing her face into Alex's armpit. "Okay."
"Okay?"
"Okay."
End
Marco had to remain a sphinx without a riddle. Well written and well observed.
Perhaps the best story in this genre I have read on Lit - wonderful mingling of characters and their stories, excellent, sparing choice of language, the authenticity of experience dripping (a suitable word) from each page. I had to read it in several chunks as I was overtaken by the need and desire to masturbate.
I much prefer long stories and this tale certainly delivered on that front. Moreover, it was well written throughout. But it was a little too heavy on the sexual permutations and a bit too light on plot. Furthermore, despite various characters declaring love for each other, there was no real sense of love at all, just sex for the sake of it. And finally, none of the characters were really likeable and if at least some of the characters in a story are not likeable, then there's little point to it. The reader just doesn't care about them. I've given five stars for the writing quality but frankly I didn't care for any of the characters---just about all of them deserved to wallow in their misery.
I especially enjoyed how, right at the very beginning, Marlo orders the pretty girl modelling for her out of her clothes before then taking the girl doggy-style with her strap-on! That's always just so incredibly hot!