Drowning in the Sea of Love

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Smokey125
Smokey125
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She held Mel's hands, looking coyly down at her feet as Melleny read her poem.

THOU ART TO ME A SUMMER EVE, A GRACEFUL BREEZE THAT BLOWS

A VERSE THAT DOTH IMMORTALIZE, A GENTLY BLOOMING ROSE

THOU ART TO ME THE PUREST HEART, THAT BEATS THE FAIREST BEAT

I SHALL BE THINE FOREVER MORE, FOR THOU ART MY LOVE SO SWEET.

"Aw, I love it!" Mel exalted. "It's beautiful!"

Sara let her face redden to that shy crimson blush she famously sported. "Well, I'm really really happy you like it," she said. "See, uh...the other day, when I wrote it, I, uh..." She shrugged. "...That's when I realized I was in love with you."

Mel linked their arms and put her head on Sara's shoulder. "I'm in love with you too."

Sara made her decision. "Y'know what? I'm taking the day off. I wanna be with my girl."

Mel gasped and clapped her hands. "Yay!" she exclaimed, with the joy of a small child.

"Just one thing though," said Sara. "Can we go to my house so I can turn off my alarm? And we don't have to sleep at my place, but don't forget, I've got the king-size."

"Hmm, I guess you're right," Melleny admitted. "We can sleep here next time."

"We can do anything we jolly well feel like, babe," proclaimed Sara.

"That we can...and just about anything would be fine with me. Except, um..." Mel looked down. "Next time we go to the movies, can we see something...not scary?"

They laughed.

"Come along then, my darling," said Sara in a cute voice. "I have a lovely old Fleetwood Mac song I wanna sing to you on the way home. It's, uh...it's called 'Sara.' Shocker, I know, right? But, I'll change it to 'Melleny' instead, just for you."

In the sea of love...

Where everyone would love to drown...

But now it's gone...

It doesn't matter anymore...

When you build your house then please call me home...

Melleny...

You're the poet in my heart...

Never change...

And don't you ever, ever stop.

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XNickyXXNickyXover 3 years ago

Thank you for not rushing in like almost EVERY other author does here. This story has the perfect amount of build up, character depth and realistic events happening to make it seem like a realistic fairy tale. Just how fairy tales are beautiful this story never disappointed. Gosh I need a Melleny in my life.

stroudlestroudleover 5 years ago
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Beautiful

OK so I got a few more for you. The fantasy was top draw, so sexy.

The relationship between Sara and Meleny is so much the better for the build up you gave it, not rushing into bed.

Romantic, wonderful and sexy.

Oh and the poem is worth 5 stars on it own

I carnt believe this has no other comments. It's so good

Thank you Smokey

Jc

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