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Sheriff Holbrook told Mitch not to worry. His brother was already being transported to the hospital; his fiancée was okay, according to the doctor, and Jonis was headed to jail. Bailey was talking to a deputy, giving her account of the attack. He watched her, his eyes full of admiration for the girl. She had endured the worst horror, and come through it like a champ! You never knew about some people...
Once the doctor and the psychologist had finished with Jessica, he was allowed to see her. She looked so small and frail under the blanket the paramedics had given her, but Mitch knew differently. She had endured a nightmare he wouldn't wish on anyone, but now her chin was up, her eyes alert, and he knew she would only be stronger for this test. He only hoped it wouldn't affect her decision to remain in Dry Valley. Her smile when she saw him approach gave him hope. He took her into his embrace, and just held her. He wanted to hold her like this forever, he thought, as the police scurried around them, finishing their work.
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Rita suddenly sat up in bed. Her husband asked her, in a sleepy voice, if everything was all right. It was 3:15 AM. "No," she said, distractedly. She was reacting to her instincts, and they told her something was wrong. "I don't think so, Donnie."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 17 years agoGotwood:
You took the legal road, but picture this: A naked body trussed up with barwire (or better yet razorwire). Bound by the hands, legs, Testicles, peter, and throat, tied to the bumper of a pickup truck traveling down a gravel road in the moonlight at 2 miles per hour. See what I mean? Otherwise a great continuation of a really fine story. Thank You. Ronnie W.
RedHairedandFriendlyover 17 years agoGreat work gotwood, this story wouldn't have been a true blue romance if there wasn't a bad guy!!! Great work, and thanks so much for bringing Jonis into our story. :D ~ Red.
jushornyover 17 years agoYou did an excellent job of writing a difficult scene. This chain story has benefited greatly from your writing
Anonymousover 17 years agohas been mentioned in today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout which is in the Bulletin Boards
