Jasmine smiled as she replied, "I would like that a lot. How does tomorrow night sound?"
"Sounds so perfect, we can go out for dinner, drinks, dancing, and have romance at my place downtown." D'Artagnan said as he looked into her eyes and kissed her hand.
"I look forward to that and enjoying more of New Orleans on my vacation." Jasmine said as she kissed him on the lips.
THE END
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Good effort but...
You lose some energy in some of your sentences and your descriptors fall a bit flat. "took off her....shoes." Naah, "pumps," "stiliettos" etc.
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