Elysium: The Chance

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Mary turned her dark eyes to me, and I saw them flash with excitement.

"I guess you'll have to work off that debt, won't you?" She said.

"I don't... understand," I stuttered. "Work for you?"

"Well, of course." Mary blew a plume of smoke into the breeze. "I could use some talent like you. Clint is a high dollar customer of mine, and you rocked his world, girlie. I've got just the spot for you, if you'd let me have you."

I gawked at her. "You'd... you'd hire me? Would I... look like..."

Mary grinned. "Well how else would you look? Of course, we might work on your figure a bit. You might look sexier if we made you top heavy. Boost a few cup sizes. Have to buy you a new wardrobe. Maybe change your hair a couple times a month. Make you look different every week."

My mouth hung open but no words escaped. Mary stared right into my eyes.

"Unless you'd prefer not to," she said.

I swallowed hard. The moisture in my eyes was about to stream down my face.

"You'd really do that for me?" I asked, my voice breaking.

Mary smiled. "Clint will be looking for you the next time he visits."

A tear slid down my cheek. Gazing out at the ocean, I felt the faces fall away. My father's grimace of anger and shame, the contorted rage on Joey's face, the sideways glares of disgust from my coworkers... they all drifted off on the waves.

"I'll... never be able to thank you enough," I said. "Why do this for me?"

Mary flicked her ashes and blew out whisps of curling smoke that dashed into the wind. She turned a beautiful smile at me.

"It's who you are," Mary told me. "They were right about you, sweetheart."

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Thanks so much for sticking with it. I hope you enjoyed this story. Any vote is appreciated, don't forget to give it your rating. Leave me a comment and tell me what you thought, good or otherwise, I learn from every bit of it. Hopefully, you'll want to return through Elysium's doors. Look for other Elysium titles if you liked it. More will follow.

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tonitemptstonitemptsover 2 years ago

How have I missed this story? That was fantastic. Excellent work.

AmyZhenAmyZhenalmost 9 years ago
One of the greats

There are far too many boring, mechanical sex stories on this site. Way too many awful, degrading humiliation stories involving crossdressers, too. This is neither; it's so far over the bar of quality on this site that I don't think it even noticed surpassing it. It's both heartbreaking and heartwarming, wish fulfillment rooted in reality in a way that is so rarely done well, and so affirmational and sex-positive in its climax and denouement. In short - and to wrap up - very well done indeed; you are a master storyteller and far too good for the likes of this site!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
5 Stars

5 Stars.

thankyou.

JagFarlaneJagFarlaneabout 9 years ago
Excellent

Well written, I loved the slow build up and sudden crash down before the pieces fall together into a beautiful story.

naughtyinsilknaughtyinsilkabout 9 years ago

Beautifully written, fully of emotion brought back a few unhappy memories for me and a few good ones too. The pace wasn't hurried. Looking forward to reading more about the Elysium, and maybe also Shannon returning to the bar when her former band plays there, to shove their faces in it xx

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