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Well done so far
Excellent so far. Can hardly wait for chapters 3, 4 and...?
Excellent
Great story xoxoxo Annette
KILLING
HIS RESPONSE MAYBE THE KILLING WON'T STOP WHEN HE LEAVS HERE
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This is a story not real, its from someones imagination. The way some of you react that's why this country is what in the condition it's in.(Poor) Wake up, you have red blood like everyone. It's the poor attitudes like you have that will not let us all move forward. Even if you can hide your attitude in front of everyone which I'm sure you do, it will nevertheless keep us all down. What will happen if you saw a man trick his wife and used her like the husband in the story, be quite. The story to me was about poor treatment of the wife and for spice the writer added a different race. It didn't matter what race It just wasn't the husband he's the low life in the story. Yes she broke her marriage vows. Oh my god the writer wrote about black man meeting her needs and more. All thoughts about the story were lost to you. You must be really afraid and insecure you loose all insight to the free made up story about the wifes plight To worry about your own. Oh by the way what's in your heads about race is nearly as imaginary as the story only difference it's not free. When a group of people are hurt because they are not the same as you that keeps us all back. Who you are is crap shoot at best if anyone had a choice I'm sure they wouldn't choose to be someone that others are so afraid of or don't like. Nobody one has that choice.more...
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