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She had gotten naked: for him, she had touched a phallus for the first time; for him, yet now because of his touch, despite her initial shock and repulsion, she was totally alone with her selfish ecstasy. She had never known it could be this good.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoI didn't notice the particular detail that bothered the first two commenters and don't care, it would be easy to go back and edit. I thought your first chapter was well written and I'd like to see where you go with this story. :)
Anonymousover 7 years agothe ships were not searching universes nor galaxies they were searching solar systems. If two systems away they sure as fuck didn't jump to another universe. You might want to do a little research before you start writing your next story. This one in five year might be a good one to rewrite. As of right now it's not worth reading.
Anonymousover 7 years agoIf I can get past that, I will be curious where the story is going.
