Evelyn loved to see him so pleased, and continued to take his instruction. Instinctively she began to speed up, but Dr. Kines stopped her. "No," he said. "Not that way. Lie down on the couch."
Evelyn stretched her lithe, naked body out on the couch. Kines straddled her, then leaned part of his weight on her, his chest pushing up against her breasts. He lowered his face down by her right ear, his lips brushing it as he whispered, "Good girl. Understand something. You belong to me now. You let no one else touch you this way. Do you understand?"
She bit her lip and nodded vigorously.
"Good," he said. "Not so much as a kiss, not so much as holding hands with anybody. You are mine to touch, only mine. You will see me once a week and this is what we will do. Tell me you understand."
"Yes," she said.
"Yes what?" Kines asked.
"Yes SIR," Evelyn declared, and then Kines grinned like a wolf and slid his cock inside her, breaking through her innocence, thrusting deep into her for the first time.
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Interesting Observation
Unicorn, I'm glad you enjoyed it. That's a very insightful comment, and it hints at the psychological patterns people use when they have any kind of social "transaction." Especially your comment about how yielding up control is sometimes a way of absolving oneself of responsibility or guilt. It's true that the doctor crosses a line he shouldn't, and that he is misusing his power, wielding an undue amount of influence on somebody not as strong as he, in terms of willpower and intellect. But at any time, Evelyn could have simply walked out. This story is pure fantasy, because Evelyn actually does like what is going on, which is highly unlikely in a real life situation. The doctor is doing something I would find disgusting and reprehensible in real life, but for many of us fantasy provides excitement by depicting the crossing of lines, and improbable or surprising weavings of mutual desires. Not to mention the age-old "power exchange" play.more...
What I liked About Your Story
What I liked about your story was the trust element between Evelyn and her doctor. While it does not relieve her of responsibility (i.e. knowing the good doc may not be so good), it shows the conflicted nature of someone going through a process of which they are not familiar and getting dragged into it based on misguided trust which alleviates guiltmore...
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