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Click here"Holy shit, is that..." Nate whispered, narrowing his eyes.
"She's watching us!" Ketri breathed incredulously.
"Well then Jesus Christ, close the blast shield. Those Sisters creep me the fuck out." Nate shuddered involuntarily. Suddenly, the eyes blinked, then disappeared. The two stared into the night, and Nate thought he made out a shadowy figure streaking silently away. As soon as the figure was gone, Ketri slapped the blast shield button and they stared at each other in confusion as the shield lowered over the windshield.
This story is exactly what I look for on literotica. Great plot and lead off to the next chapter. Also like how you started it out too. Never know if that is the end middle or beginning.
Okay, so this must be one of the best. Like in ever. With the bonus being that it also very sexy. Her additional alien attributes were introduced in ways that made her more sensual, instead of the 'the little thing that goes whir and gets all mechanical at lunch-time'. And now I'm really shitting myself concerning 'Sister's' jealous streak.
Possibly the most creative piece of erotic prose I have ever read. Very impressive.
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Damn good. I've read a lot of crap, here and elsewhere. Good writing doesn't just happen. Plot, dialogue, characterization, even a sense of direction (of the plot): Takes planning and forethought.
Excellent submission. Looking forward to more.