Enslaved Paws Ch. 03

Fire

It's lit can't wait for more.

She is fiest

I want to see her turn around and bite him. Or kick him. Or something. Please help her be strong enough not to eat. She needs to keep fighting back in little ways, and I really hope that she won't, no matter what he does, tell him her name. She is strong. I can't wait to see what is next.more...

So much promise!

I hope you can maintain this rate of updates. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh dear. Is he going to fuck the name out of her? Like in 'beguile the pussy'? It was bad enough - him being pretty - but now he has horns too. Black ones none the less, to match his eye colour. You're sick. We're supposed to dislike this guy...sorry, featherless cliffjumper. Thank fuck he has stuff coming out his butt (what IS that, I'm a little worried), or I'd go for the deal myself, not being one of those welcome on the right hand side of the road anyway (it gets nasty).
He has a name-fetish. That's why he hasn't sexually attacked her yet. No go without being able to scream the name - no fountain. Poor guy. Maybe she should just give him some deceased relative's name, so that if he does feel inspired to read suggestions, at least it will seem familiar enough to her mind to fool him. I mean, tummy full, balls empty - that usually shuts 'em up, doesn't it?
Please don't let his buddy be an angel. They're a conspiratorial type and the 2 of them are already whispering around corners like boyscouts. I don't particularly like angels - it must be the halo thing. Bloody pansies. If you're gay, speak the fuck up, don't point at other people, bloody hypocrites. Gives me the creeps. Not gay boys - angels.
Shot for story. I hope you have as much fun writing it as I have reading it.more...

When the choic is enslavement or death,

There is only one outcome. And it isn't pain that breaks people...it is the opposite. A demon lacks empathy, the very name evokes a being of power but also a desire to inflict pain. When your choice is enslavement to pain, to torture or death...I don't think she would accept surrender.more...