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Click here"Let's hope he doesn't have any more of these! Our FTL's are charging."
It all seemed easier than I expected.
But then the Nose-cone of the space bus retracted and the stubby muzzles of two FTL's appeared, we were hit with such force it threw me out of the seat and the lights flickered. I could smell the stinging smell of metal burning, I did not fall to the floor, I hit the ceiling and many things, were floating with me. We had lost Arti grav! The Computronic voice said with the same friendly voice: "Structural damage to Hull, Shields are no longer operational, weapons inoperable!"
I pushed myself of the ceiling, flailed back to the seat and pushed myself into it, and put on the safety straps. Sif and Astrid were still sitting in their seats, they had strapped themselves in before and I realized how important that was. Elena however floated in the small command center and she was not moving. I hoped she was just knocked out and said. "We are toast if he fires again! Let's hope he needs to recharge as well. You don't know if our Sub rocs work in space, Sif?"
"I think they use rocket motors and should work, but they are way too slow to hit anything at these distances. We would need to be real close."
Astrid unbuckled and said." I am going to the Engine room. We have a fire and I better extinguish it!"
"Be careful and hold on to something real good when I tell you to!"
She nodded and pushed herself down the ladder chute."I will be Eric!"
"Sif get us all the speed you can get. And aim straight for that bastard. Let's see if our Ultronit is stronger than his Duranium!"
"Engines work fine but the helm controls are sluggish."
"Girls, we don't have space suits aboard and it might be the last thing we do on this side of reality, but if they have more of these bombs then we are the only thing standing between Nilfeheim and them."
Sif turned. "That is what it means to be a warrior of Nilfeheim, I took the words of the Eldest very serious. To do what's right. If we have to die, I die saving our world and with my best friends. One could not ask to go out any better than this!"
I unbuckled, fished for Elena's leg and while I held myself with my feet to my seat pushed her into hers and buckled her up. She had a pulse and was breathing but she did not show any other signs of life.
She then said without opening her eyes. "I may not be a warrior but that goes for me too!"
The Poseidon was accelerating quite quickly and the Space bus grew bigger by the heartbeat. "Everyone, this is it! Hold tight!"
Whoever steered the Space bus had now realized what we were attempting and they fired again, probably luck for us they weren't charged fully, still the Poseidon shuddered, the lights went out. With a red flicker red lights came on, and the Computronic warned. "Reactor breach, all life support off line, emergency power limited. Collision warning!"
Our field screens were off, but I could see the space bus well from the front viewport, they had fired their reaction thrusters to change course. The Ultronit nose of the Poseidon still glowed white hot from the last hit. The air was filled with putrid smoke and felt hot to the skin but we held true course and plowed into the space bus. Even the red lights went out and I was thrown hard into the straps of the safety harness. It was as if Thor's mighty hammer had struck us head on, the hull rang like a mis-tuned bell and there was the screeching and tearing sound of metal.
Then it was over. The front viewport was cracked but held, and I could see Nilfeheim in its entire blue and white splendor. I heard Sif cough. "I think we plowed right through him!"
Elena groaned."Astrid, she is gone!"
"She went to the engine room to extinguish a fire." I said
"Tyr has gifted me with Psionic abilities. I am still new at this but I can feel you all. I just lost Astrid!"
"Can you feel the enemy?"
"I am not good at this yet. I don't know their minds."
I unbuckled just as the Radio crackled." This is Space Port Control. Poseidon we have seen you destroy the Bomb and cut that Space bus in half, can you receive us?"
I coughed and my voice wheezed. "Yes we can hear you but we are heavily damaged and have no energy left, multiple casualties. We won't make it back down. Please convey this message to the Elders: Sif Arnske, Astrid Mossberg and Elena..." I cursed and said."Elena I don't know your last name."
She whispered." I am of the Olafson clan, a servant and daughter of a low men woman; we do not have last names."
"Space port I repeat, let Nilfeheim know that Sif of the Arnske clan, Astrid Mossberg and my sister Elena Olafson have given their best to defend the planet."
"Hold out, Poseidon. The USS Galveston is on her way. She is only four hours out!"
"I don't know if we have four hours, but we will try!"
A few of the red emergency lights came back on and I floated myself to the First aid locker and took four Coma Injectors. They were as everything else very old and I hoped the drugs would still work. I said to them." I will put us all in coma sleep, that brings our needs for oxygen down to a minimum and I hope it will last."
I injected Elena and Sif before they could object and then made my way down to the Engine room. My way was blocked by a round airlock door and through the little round view port I could see a gaping hole in the hull and Astrid stuck in it. I knew she was dead!
I returned to the Command chair and strapped myself in. I did not take the Coma drug, one had to be awake at the Helm, that was the ancient tradition and I would honor it, till I was gone!
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The USS Galveston had made it in time to save Sif, Elena and me. Two days had passed since we had been rescued. We all stood at Oslo Plaza right at the Wharf. Again most of Nilfeheim was there. The Elders, Clan Chiefs and everyone of Halstaad Fjord. A grieving woman had turned her head to the chest of a tall Freeman, Astrid's parents.
Before us on the water was a wooden dragon boat and on its deck garbed in the finest warrior outfit, holding a sword was Astrid. She wore the yellow on maroon colors of the original flag the settlers of the Clan of Erikson the first warrior and the sigil of Thor's hammer.
Egill spoke with the most somber expression. "We are all humbled by the heroic deeds of these young warriors who have saved our very planet. You all have seen the report sent to us by Schwartz Intergalactic why a pirate ship disguised as a Space Bus wanted to drop a Planetary Incendiary Bomb on our world. Eric Olafson, Sif Arnske, Elena Olafson and Astrid Mossberg have risked their lives and saved everyone on this world. We all owe them our thanks. Astrid Mossberg has paid with her life so we may see another sunrise!
Only recently a young woman became a Warrior completing the Ancient Challenge. Now we are here to pay our highest respect to another woman who has proven beyond any doubt that our women can be as brave and full of honor as any male warrior. Astrid Mossberg was declared a Warrior and today we send her on her last journey and there is no doubt she will sit with Odin and Thor and all the heroes of the past as an equal on the tables in Valhalla!"
Egill took a torch and handed it to her father who threw it in the wooden boat.
Her mother had sorrow and pride in her face as she threw her torch. The boat gained slowly speed and moved towards the harbors entrance. It was beyond the harbor walls now and then as the flames reached the sail and it burned bright, a sound of collective awe and shock went through the crowd as an incredibly huge white Tyranno fin breached and splashed with a tremendous thunderclap back into the water, taking the burning boat down with it.
Father came up and put his hand on Elena's shoulder. "My son has declared you his Sister and such you shall be. I swear on Odin's spear and all eyes and ears, you will be the first Daughter I never had and all Honors of our clans will be bestowed on you! You shall be second to no one and share Eric's rights as a first Born, so speak I Isegrim Olafson!"
Sif who held my hand the entire time wiped her eyes. "Eric, I will leave with Egill as soon as possible. What happened can never happen again and I must learn all there is so I can do my part!"
"I understand."
I still looked out past the harbor walls over the churning deep green waves and the lead colored sky as Snow started to fall. The events of the past years flashed past my inner eyes and I could not help but wonder what the future was holding in store for me.
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Here ends this part of the Story of Eric Olafson. Join me as it continues in Eric Olafson, First Journeys
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Norse space opera of the finest kind!
Boo hoo there are little bits of editing needed, doesn't detract from an amazing story.
Cheers and all the best
Phil
Okay, I found a solution to my editing problems. It's a company called Grammarly and they do offer expert help on editing and they charge .099 per word (that is an average of 630 bucks per chapter. that would be $15,675 per Volume or $117,425 for 11 volumes. Unless I win the lottery, find a truly generous patron or a traditional publisher provides an editor. This is the best I can do. I have a gofundme page of mine that tries to raise money exactly for that purpose. Editing, professional promotion, finding an agent, getting a new laptop, etc. But I am still far from that goal
Sorry about the editing problems.
Vanessa
I read this first instalment and your second instalment. Both are good and thought-provoking and are an interesting blend of Norse and Sci-Fi. The plot is complex and captivating.
Unfortunately, both Part 1 and Part 2 would benefit from careful proof reading and use of an editor. There are many examples where 'form' is used instead of 'from,' where words are missing and incorrect words are used, e.g. 'where' for 'were' and vice versa. Since some words that were incorrectly used sound the same as the word that was likely meant to be used, I have the limited perception that parts of the text may have been dictated into transcription software and not proof read.
I look forward to part 3 and subsequent parts.
Your story is amazing Vanessa and deserves a far wider audience.
It does however need some serious editing for spelling and grammar. I didn't let this impair my enjoyment too much or stop me voting with five stars.
Now looking forward to volume 2.