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Click hereThe Commander answered grimly, "They weren't going to wake you up, Lieutenant." She continued, "I convinced them to wake you up when I told them that you were a Lieutenant under my command and that you would help us to carry out our rebellion." She finished, "Among other things."
I pondered over what the Commander had just told me. "So, Commander," I said at last, "I take it that you have joined the rebellion?"
She answered without hesitation, "Yes, I have." The Commander continued, "There's no other place for me on this world." She finished grimly, "Or on any other world, for that matter."
I nodded and said, "I understand." I continued, "But, what reason do you have for trusting me to join your rebellion, Commander?" I finished, "After all, I was only assigned to your command a couple of weeks before we went into the Hibernation Chambers for the trip out here."
The Commander nodded and said, "I wanted to have someone here on Eros from my own time." She continued with a little smile, "Plus, I think that the women of the rebellion will make it worth your while to join us." She finished, "As you are now, no doubt, aware, I'm not even your Commander anymore. That entire world is long gone."
I stood there thinking for a long time. Finally, I said, "All right, Commander. It appears that I owe you my life. I'll join your little rebellion." I finished with a long sigh, "I have no where else to go either."
The Commander smiled and said, "Thank you, Yuri."
She turned to the other women and said, "From now on, the Lieutenant should be addressed as Earthborn, like myself. He is now part of our group." She finished, "As it is with me, his presence here, and his real name, should only be spoken of in complete secrecy, until after the revolution is over."
She said to me, "You should address me, formally, as Earthborn from now on. That is our title here." She continued, "Please call me Michelle, in private."
Michelle rose from her seat. "Earthborn, we will talk again later." She continued, "Tonga will show you to your quarters, when you're finished with your medical examination," as she nodded towards the tall, flaming-red-haired woman. She finished, "Enjoy the rest of your examination," as she gave me a tight, knowing smile and left the examination room.
Doctor Miriam immediately walked over and began to undress me. She said, "Now I'm going to fuck you to verify that your sexual organs are in proper working order, Earthborn." She continued, "Then, I'll test your sperm, and that will complete your medical examination." She finished, "Please lie down on the examination table."
Lying back down on the examination table in confusion, I watched as Doctor Miriam took some lotion, from a nearby drawer, and rubbed it all over her hairless vulva. She climbed onto the end of the examination table and knelt between my legs. Doctor Miriam gave me a crooked smile as she leaned far back and spread her knees wide. I could clearly see her puffy outer pussy lips and her long, thick inner lips. Her inner pussy lips were the same rosy-pink color as her erect nipples. Using her entire hand, Doctor Miriam slowly rubbed the lotion over her entire vulva. She seemed completely oblivious to the fact that Tonga, our tall, flaming-red-haired guide, was still in the room and was watching us intently.
Doctor Miriam watched me as she spread her long, thick, rosy-pink inner pussy lips, and slow inserted one long, slender finger into her vagina. She moaned softly as she slowly began to work her finger in-and-out of her pussy. Still watching me, she inserted a second, long, slender finger into her pussy and began to massage her breasts with her other hand. Moaning softly, Doctor Miriam thrust her fingers slowly in-and-out of her pussy, while she gently rubbed the palm of her hand over her clit.
Tonga walked over and stood by my side, while Doctor Miriam continued to masturbate in front of me. Tonga said, "The Earthborn woman told us that we would need to explain our customs to you, Earthborn." Tonga continued, "On Eros it is customary for a woman to masturbate herself to orgasm before fucking a man. This way, the woman satisfies herself and, at the same time, arouses the man that she is going to fuck." She finished, "Then, when the man fucks the woman, there is no need for him to trouble himself over satisfying her completely."
Tonga continued, "It is also customary for a man to reject a woman and refuse to fuck her, if he feels that she has not orgasmed strongly enough." She continued, "I'm sure that that will not be a problem for Doctor Miriam today."
Roughly pulling on her own hard, erect nipples, Doctor Miriam thrust her fingers faster and faster in-and-out of her pussy. She continued to watch me as her moaning became louder. Her entire body convulsed as she moaned, "Oooooh! Oooooh! Oooooh! Oooooh!" and grabbed for the edge of the examination table as she started to fall.
I lunged forward and held her by the shoulders before she fell off of the examination table. Doctor Miriam's face and chest were flushed, she was covered in a thin sheen of sweat, her breath was ragged, and her eyes were shining. "Thank you, Earthborn," she said.
Brushing back her long hair and regaining her composure, Doctor Miriam said, "Your penis is now fully erect and very impressive, Earthborn." She continued, "Now please lie back down on the examination table while I fuck you."
I was still confused, and said, half in jest, "Don't I get a kiss first, Doctor Miriam?"
Doctor Miriam seemed genuinely surprised by my question. She gave Tonga a strange look, then turned back to me and smiled crookedly. "As you wish, Earthborn," she said.
Both of us knelt on the examination table as Doctor Miriam leaned forward and kissed my gently on the lips. I put my arms around her and kissed her back a little more forcefully.
When I broke our kiss, Doctor Miriam's eyes were shining and she said, "Lie back down whenever you're ready, Earthborn, so that I can fuck you."
I laid back down on the examination table and Doctor Miriam moved forward and straddled my waist. Reaching behind her she gently grasped my eight inch long, two inch thick, rock-hard cock. A look of concern came over her face and she said, "I must put your penis into my vagina slowly, Earthborn. I have not fucked anyone in a long time and your penis is large for me."
I thought to myself, "Doctor Miriam used clinical terms to describe our bodies, right after she said she that was going to fuck me. This asteroid is a very strange place."
I asked, "Do all of the men on Eros have their sexual organs examined in this manner, Doctor Miriam?"
"I only examine the sexual organs of the men, in this way, upon their specific request, Earthborn. However, this is the procedure that we of the Health Guild have been taught and have always used," Doctor Miriam answered.
Slowly, and with some grimacing, Doctor Miriam lowered her beautiful body onto my rock-hard cock until her warm, tight pussy was fully impaled. Her pussy was very tight and I could see that she was in some discomfort.
I said, "Doctor Miriam, we really don't have to do this. I can assure you that my sexual organs are in perfect working order."
She gave me a crooked little smile and said, "I must complete your examination to be certain, Earthborn."
Very slowly, Doctor Miriam began to move herself up and down on my rock-hard cock. Reaching up, I gently placed my hands on her large, firm breasts, feeling her hard, erect nipples pressing back against my palms. Doctor Miriam began to rock herself back-and-forth a little faster on my hard-on. She moaned very softly as I gently rubbed my thumbs over her hard, erect nipples.
Doctor Miriam increase the speed of her rocking on my erect manhood. Using my thumb, I reached down and gently rubbed her clit. She moaned louder as I slowly moved my thumb back-and-forth. I pulled her long, curly hair to one side, and gathered some in my other hand. Using the ends of her hair like a brush, I gently rubbed her hard, erect nipples. Doctor Miriam giggled and gasped as I teased her nipples with her own hair, and rubbed her clit with my thumb.
Her breathing became labored as she increased her speed again. Doctor Miriam's body spasmed and she moaned loudly, "Oooooh! Oooooh! Oooooh! Ooooooooooh! " while her tight pussy contracted around my rock-hard cock. She collapsed against my chest and lay still for a moment, breathing hard and covered with a thin sheen of sweat. When she raised her head, her face and chest were flushed and her eyes were shining. Doctor Miriam smiled down at me and said, "Your medical examination is nearly complete, Earthborn. I have but to test your sperm."
I smiled up at her and said, "Well, you'll need a sample of my sperm before you do any testing." Her smile turned to a look of distress as Doctor Miriam realized that I had not yet ejaculated my sperm into her willing vagina.
"My sexual organs need a little more stimulating, Doctor Miriam," I laughed.
Holding my rock-hard cock tightly inside of her warm, tight pussy, I rolled Doctor Miriam over onto her back. My maneuver was made much easier by the lighter-than-Earth simulated gravity of the rotating asteroid.
"Now I'll fuck you for awhile, Doctor Miriam," I said with a smile.
Putting my weight on one elbow, I leaned over Doctor Miriam and kissed her on the mouth. With my free hand I gently massaged her large, beautiful, firm breasts. Pushing my tongue past her lips, I French-kissed her. Slowly, I began to thrust my rock-hard cock in-and-out of Doctor Miriam's warm, tight pussy.
I had been fairly close to coming before Doctor Miriam orgasmed. It wasn't long after I increased the speed of my thrusts into her warm, tight pussy that I pushed my rock-hard cock into her my full length, and spasmed and spurted my cum deep inside of her.
Doctor Miriam looked up at me with her crooked smile and said, "Your sexual organs are in excellent working condition, Earthborn."
My cock was still rock-hard within Doctor Miriam's warm, tight pussy. Smiling back at her I said "I think that you should examine my sexual organs one more time, Doctor Miriam, just to be sure."
Smiling a broad, crooked smile, Doctor Miriam answered, "Yes, let me examine your sexual organs again, Earthborn, just to be certain they're in good working condition after your long hibernation."
Increasing the speed of my thrusts into Doctor Miriam's warm, tight pussy, I gently pushed my tongue into her mouth while I played with her hard, erect nipples. I increase the length of my strokes inside of her, pushing my rock-hard cock all the way into Doctor Miriam, then pulling it almost all the way back out of her pussy again.
Doctor Miriam moaned softly as I increased the speed of my thrusts into her warm, tight pussy again. Within a few minutes, her breathing became labored and she convulsed beneath me, while her tight pussy contracted and she moaned loudly, "Oooooh! Oooooh! Oooooh! Oooooh! " and rolled her head from side to side. Then she lay still, bathed in sweat, smiling up at me.
Maintaining the speed and length of my thrusts into Doctor Miriam's warm, tight pussy, I kissed her gently on the mouth. Bending my head to her bosom, I gently sucked her hard, erect nipples into my mouth, one-at-a-time. Doctor Miriam moaned softly and began to fondle her nipples with her own hands.
Increasing the strength of my thrusts, I alternated my kisses from her mouth, to her neck, to her shoulders. I nibbled gently on Doctor Miriam's ears while I held her tightly by the shoulders. Her breathing became labored again, and she moaned in my ear. Within a few minutes her body spasmed and she hugged me tight as her pussy contracted around my rock-hard cock. She moaned loudly, " Ooooooooooh! Ooooooooooh! Oh!" and lay still with her eyes closed, covered once more in sweat.
Within seconds I spasmed and spurted my second load of hot cum deep within Doctor Miriam's warm, tight pussy.
She smiled up at me, with her crooked smile, as I slowed my thrusts in-and-out of her pussy as my cock slowly softened. She said, "Your sexual organs are in excellent working condition, and your stamina is excellent as well, Earthborn."
Hearing a loud moan coming from behind me, I turned my head and saw Tonga sitting in a nearby chair with her skirt up around her waist and her fingers buried deep within her flaming red-haired bush. She convulsed on the chair in her own orgasm and moaned loudly, "Ooooooooooh!"
As I watched, Tonga calmed down, brushed back her hair, smoothed down her skirt, and walked over to the examination table.
"Is your medical examination now complete, Doctor Miriam?" she asked.
"Yes, Tonga, I'm finished except for testing the Earthborn's sperm," said Doctor Miriam, "but, he's given me more than a sufficient quantity for testing."
"Then, I'll escort the Earthborn to his quarters, while you complete your tests," said Tonga.
I kissed Doctor Miriam gently on the lips and slowly withdrew my now soft cock from her warm, now very wet, pussy. She held a hand tightly over her sperm filled vagina, as she slowly climbed down from the examination table. She smiled at me once more, and then turned away to test my sperm.
After washing up in the examination room's sink, I put on my nondescript coverall and booties. Doctor Miriam seemed surprised when I kissed her gently on the cheek before I left the Medical Facility.
Tonga escorted me through a long series of winding corridors to my quarters. I could smell her musky, womanly scent in the sterile air of the corridors, as I followed her and watched the sway of her beautiful, long, flaming-red hair and her wide hips.
Michelle, was waiting for me, in the common room, outside of my quarters, when we arrived. She said with a mischievous smile, "You'll be happy to know that Doctor Miriam just called and said that she is very happy with both the quality and quantity of your sperm, Yuri."
I laughed and said, "You knew what the good Doctor was going to do with me back there, didn't you, Michelle?" She looked like a much younger, different person from the Commander that I had originally known, and it now seemed natural to call her by her first name.
Michelle laughed and said, "Yes, I did." She continued, "The people and customs of Eros are much different than those of our old Earth."
How many times do you have to refer to it as a 'rock-hard cock'? Some imagination and perhaps a bit of care could have made this worth reading.
One star.
but i have to agree somewhat with the previous comment. try not to ramble on so much, because that seems to lead you in circles. and the antagonist does have a freakish talent for guesstimating body measurements. he was an engineer, right? not a tailor? on the whole though, quite a good story. good action, with an actual plot. well done.
For a sci-fi sex story, the plot progression was okay. The "action" scenes was okay, too. That being said, you have a lot of repetiton - there are numerous places you use the same phrasing over and over. You go on and on about the women's height and the fact that they're wearing 4" heels - you mention the specific height over and over. You also have given the character a near mystical ability to judge cup sizes and bust/waist/hip measurement. Unless this guy is supposed to be computer driven like a Terminator, try describing the women rather then giving a spec sheet.