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"Come for me right now!" Mitch roared as I could feel his release, even through the condom. All my synapses started firing as this supernova blasted through me and drew me in. I just kept going, one long release, my back arching forward, all my senses dulled 'til I couldn't go anymore, and I blacked out.
When I woke up, I was in a bed. Huh? When did I get here? Someone's hand was around me. I turned to see Mitch's face, staring at me. Leaning down to kiss me, I was more worried about my morning breath then the kiss itself.
"Morning, sleepyhead," Mitch whispered to me, slowly rubbing nose to nose.
"Good morning, Mitch," I squeaked. Man, what happened to my voice? He leaned over like he was about to share the secrets of the universe and I saw him smiling.
"I carried you here when you blacked out last night. Jade, I know this is early, but I meant what I said. I don't want this to be a one time thing. Can we see how this goes?" It doesn't take me long to think. I wanted to be with this man and see what life had ahead of us.
"Baby, is it okay?" Mitch looked at me, unsure of what to think.
I leaned up and kissed him slowly. "Yes. Lets give us a shot. I think we deserve some good times don't you?" I settled into his arms and sighed thinking about what the future held for us and for the first time in a long time, believing that he felt the same way.
Again, comments are welcomed. I have 3 other stories in the works and want to get better and better.
Thank you Creepyrj and LunaEroticaMystica for encouraging me to write. I have been wanting to for a long time and hope that they know I appreciate them in my life.
The Dark Phoenyx
- COMMENTS
IanSaulWhitcombover 8 years agoYou have a lyrical and highly imaginative way of visualizing the action and evoking sincere, genuine emotion. Very nice!
mitchawaalmost 9 years agoScares are beautiful. I know because I have them too. It took me a long time to overcome what I thought was a barrier to sex and love much like Jade. You have a great hook, and a long lead in to the lesbian sex scene, and the beginning of Jade's self esteem. The party and her new look was a interesting way to lead her to the garden and Mitch. The sex scene between two large scared people was well done. The swooning and being carried to bed and her awaking and Mitch's long term interest was a great way to bring the story to a conclusion. You're a good writer with a good imagination who should continue writing. I enjoyed the story a great deal and look forward to reading more of your stories.
Soft1017about 10 years agoReading this again brought back so many memories and inspiration :). Still one of my favorites that always brings me back to more positive days of writing on here.
