Every Man's Fantasy Ch. 28

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Danielle and Kalyndra ran to the park, taking the south side with the landscape gardens and the children's play area. Ash and Ezra took the institute's central precinct and the library, where Hazel spent hours studying her textbooks.

Wildchild and Rod took the north part of Fanshaw Park up to the woods, splitting up to go either side of the lake.

It was Rod who found her, sitting with her back against a tree, her head in her hands, sobbing.

He approach and knelt down. She was wet, cold and exhausted.

"Hazel, please don't cry."

She looked up, her eyes red. She put her arms around him and he held her tightly.

"Why did he do it?" she asked plaintively.

"I don't know. ... Sam's on her way now. We'll take you home. We'll fix this. I promise."

"Doesn't he love me anymore?"

"I think he does. He ran everywhere looking for you."

"Then why?"

"I don't know."

He heard Wildchild's footsteps behind him. He helped Hazel up and put his coat over her shoulders, leaving a gap for Wildchild to get inside and embrace her.

Hazel held Wildchild and began sobbing again, her shoulders heaving. Wildchild could not speak. She could only hold her girlfriend tightly. Tears ran down her face as she kissed Hazel's cheek, whispering words of comfort and love.

"Sorry I ran," Hazel said when she could make her voice work again. "I heard you and Rod together. You were so happy. And I, ... I couldn't face it. I had to get away."

"Come on," Rod said. "Let's go home."


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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Where oh where is there more of the story???? There has been almost 4 years since the last chapter and WHAT ??? NOTHING. What is wrong?

Falstaff60Falstaff605 months ago

Should be marked as a possibly abandoned story. Nothing in almost 4 years. I like the story but felt it went a bit off the rails when the main protagonist was relegated to a side character for a lot of the later chapters and the story moved off planet. Possibly lost focus and became a bit too space soap opera-ish.

JoeDierteeJoeDierteeover 1 year ago

Miss your writing. I’ve loved this story so much. Hope all is well Erinaceous!

xhristianjxhristianjover 2 years ago

I think what is most annoying about this story is that in a circumstance where a man found themselves on a planet that was totally female you would hope that he was in fact at least minimally 'masculine'. I mean for fucks sake even your description of this guy at the start sounds like the quintessential millennial, beta male so often found lurking around their mother's basements and trolling Twitter.

If the women hadn't initiated it at the start this guy would have happily sat around masturbating to his memories of hentai porn and having to watch this guy get dragged everywhere and into every situation was frankly frustrating as heck. At least in similar stories on here, at least the protagonist shows some signs he's actually attracted to women and enjoys having sex.

PurplefizzPurplefizzover 2 years ago

I desperately want to read the rest of this story, having binged it all the way through, I also understand that authors don’t put unpaid writing at the top of their to-do lists in normal life, that said, pretty please with a cherry on top and chocolate sprinkles, could we have another episode please? 5⭐️ On every episode so far!

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