Excellent Timing Ch. 03

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"You're so strong Kaden. The way your dad died was so horrible, but you've learned so much from it. You've blossomed into a beautiful girl inside and outside. I meant that the last time I told you that."

"You really think I'm have a beautiful personality? I mean what my parents say..."

"Fuck your parents Kaden! I know I'm supposed to respect your parents Kaden, but Kaden, you can't sale your soul to them. You can sale your summer to them. Kaden, you are so humble, so modest...You have no idea. You're the exact opposite of what your parents say. I don't know where they got that idea. I haven't heard you complain once of the nature or roughing it up. In fact, I think you're incredibly grateful. I mean you've only thanked me about a thousand times! Kaden, you need to believe me. You have the most beautiful and shining personality."

Kaden smiled at Val and her eyes glimmered yet again. Val knew she had taken her word for it.

Val looked at Kaden and said, "What time is it?"

Kaden looked at the clock sitting on Val's desk near the window. "Umm...5:03."

"Okay good."

"Why?"

"Dinner is at 5:30. We have a bit before we need to head up there. I didn't want to be late."

Kaden shared, "Well, I think we've both cried enough tears today."

"Definitely. Can't argue with that."

"You know what's crazy Val?"

"I just met you today."

"And you feel like you've known me for your whole life?"

"Yes, totally!"

Val laughed, "Ha, ha, ha, me too baby."

"We don't really need to go to dinner, do we?"

"Why?"

"Rob gave you the rest day off didn't he? That's what you said on the phone."

"Yeah –..."

"So, that excludes you from dinner! No Soup of the Day!"

"Oh yeah, good point. I'm very forgetful. So you'll have to remind me okay?"

"Sure thing! I think I'll be around enough to remind you often."

Val smiled brightly at Kaden and replied, "And I won't find you a bit annoying."

Kaden and Val finished their now-cold tea near the dwindling fire. The logs were now primarily ashes. Kaden told Val, "My legs feel like jelly. I can't feel them."

"I'm kind of hungry too," Kaden added.

"Well Ms. Kaden, maybe I can make you a special meal tonight."

"How would you like that?"

"Sounds good. What's on the menu tonight?"

"Anything for you dear!"

"Awww, Val, you are too sweet for me!"

"So, what would you like to eat?"

"Spaghetti!" Val checked her cabinets for pasta and noodles. She didn't have any.

"Darnet, we're gonna have to walk to the dining hall to get some ingredients!"

"Well, it's okay Val. It will be good for my legs. And we'll burn some calories. What do you say?"

"Okay. Let's go then."

Val grabbed her key and opened the door for Kaden. The couple walked down the many set of stairs and made their way to the dining hall holding hands...

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great

I honestly enjoyed this story! It shows the reality of a relationship and not just the sex side of it. Please continue this story! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good Story!

Some fuckers just dont kno how to appreciate literature. And no shit it doesn't have sex! Anyways.... It very sweet and romantic! Cant wait to read more!!(: ♥♥

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wheres the sex?

this blew i thought this was a site for sex literature you suck at life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Not a Lesbian Sex fic

Ok the fact of the matter is, you have this set up as a lesbian sex fic. However, there is no sex in this fic, there is nothing alluding to it either. Just two women who are lesbians talking to each other and touching or hugging each other nothing more.

Another thing is you need to use a spell checker. When you say 'you can't sale your soul to your parents' in the writing. It should be 'you can't sell your soul to your parents'. Another mispelling is the word darnet it is darn it.

Please file this under the correct section and make spelling corrections. This should be filed under either non-erotic or romance.

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