"Of course. Anything."
When they stood up, Jacob went to dress and she waved him off. "Don't bother. There's no one here but us. There never is."
Holding up his jeans, he managed another mischievous grin. "Now I know you're on drugs. Leave these babies? You have to be kidding."
"Your butt is doing just fine on its own, cowboy," she said, giving it a little spank.
He caught her hand and pulled her close, pressing her up against him, kissing her again, full and deep. When they broke it off sometime later, he asked, "You feel safe now? Can I say it?"
"Say what?" she asked, holding his hand with one arm and tracing her fingers through his chest hair with another.
"Your name. I miss the sound of it. It's such a pretty name."
Resting her head on his shoulder, she thought for a second. "It no longer means anything to me. I think I'd like a new one, just for us, just for this place."
"Any ideas? I've always been found of Sugartits, personally. It's got an elegance, you know, like a fine velvet paintin'."
"God, no." Rolling her eyes, she bit him lightly on his shoulder for being ridiculous. "Tell you what, let's talk about it while we walk. We'll figure something out together."
And with that they walked, around the lake and into something new, in the dark, holding hands, toward the morning, naked and free of burdens, in their barefeet.
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wow
This story literally brought tears to my eyes. You have an amazing gift.
Beautiful
Indeed it was.
amazing...
This story is entirely too well written for this site. I hope you have stories that you are trying to publish. This story was amazing. Not erotica, and you could v have easily ruined it with a snuff ending, but instead choose something bittersweet. I'm a hopeless romantic, so I want to read a hea for her... I feel a little depressed now, thoughmore...
Wow
Just wow. . .I haven't been moved this much since I read Flowers for Algernon in college.
Perfect
Don't change a thing. It's perfect as it is. I'm speechless, breathless, discombobulated and in tears. Thank you for not allowing Boots to murder her while she was in her mental safe zone at the lake.
Random thoughts of the symbolism. Handkerchief =help/hinder, comfort/contain. Bible= Path to salvation/condemnation. Used condom= love/lust. Knife=Control. F5:A Mile= the strongest and most powerful tornado which destroys everything, leaving nothing in its' wake. Known as the finger of God. She had nothing left, but memories and fantasies. She was an psychological F5 or was destroyed by one.
Life is not always a full circle. Sometimes, we can't go back home, except in our minds.
This was the best story I've read ever on Lit. Your talent is extraordinary. Thank you.more...
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