Fallen Ch. 20

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Nephylim
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"Luma this... this is my mother." His eyes are shining through the tears and I have never seen him so lit up. I rise to my feet, take her hand and bow to her.

"It is my pleasure, Ma'am."

"The pleasure is mine, Sir. I have heard a great deal about you over the years from Astaria. I feel as though I already know you, although none of her descriptions do you justice. You are very beautiful, almost as beautiful as my son." She looks at him with pride glowing in her face.

"No one on earth is as beautiful as your son Madam, or any other world that I know of."

She smiles, a rosy blush rising to her cheeks. Star is grinning so hard I fear his face will split. I glance at Astaria and don't like the look on her face.

"Come and sit here with me, Star. Lauralie sit next to him and we can mother cuddle him between us." Laughing, Star allows himself to be sandwiched between two rather well endowed ladies, one of whom has a very worrying expression on her face when she looks at him.

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NephylimNephylimalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Clues

Next chapter with the editors. The clues as to why the ascension is so urgent are already there with those for eyes to see ;)

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 12 years ago
The worst part about reading this story is..

The end.... and now we have to wait geez!! I love these guys but can't wait for you to explain the urgency behind the ascension and what it is and means and will his mother have anything to do with it as Luma is not in favour.... will wait and see hehe soon please soon...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
So excited :D

I can't wait to see what happens next. To tell you the truth, I wasn't really into the story at first and I only read a glimpse of it, but then, when the later chapters came, that's when you really got me hooked onto this ;) I am in love with this storyline and YAY!! I can't wait to see how it ends :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Damn this just gets better and better. I love the ideas you introduced in this chapter. This story bleeds amazing awesomeness. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Awesome story that keeps getting more complicated but better at the same time.

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