Falling for a Stranger

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He never missed a beat and kept up his stimulation even though it must have been hard to hang on to her with the way she was bucking and writhing.

After what seemed like forever, the pleasure began to recede and Nikki was finally able to regain some control over her body.

Tom seemed to notice that she had peaked and slowed his stimulation to a gentle stoke inside her and the faintest licking on her clit.

Nikki came down slowly. Occasional orgasmic aftershocks shook through her body until Tom finally slid his fingers from her.

Nikki woke slowly. She had been dreaming of something. She couldn't remember exactly what, but she was sure it was a nice dream because she felt happy. She was also warm and comfortable and there was something else too. Something she couldn't put her finger on at first. Something was different. The bed felt different. The duvet was a little lighter than normal and smelled different; of sex. Not an overpowering stench you understand, but definitely sex. And why wasn't she wearing any clothes?

Then she tried to move. And every muscle in her body seemed to complain at once. Like a collective voice of protest from body to head that said: "Not today. We're having the day off".

But it was a pleasant aching that she felt, like after hard day's work when you can enjoy the feeling of relaxing in bed.

And that's when she remembered what had happened to her. She could almost still feel how good Tom's fingers had felt inside her as his tongue worked her clit. She let out a gentle moan at the memory.

At the sound, a warm lump of man behind her shifted on the bed. Tom snuggled closer so that he was spooning behind her. She felt his arm reach across her and hold her against his muscular torso.

"Hello sleepy-head" he whispered in her ear.

"Hello you." She replied and wiggled her bottom suggestively against him.

"How are you feeling?" Tom asked

"I'm aching all over. You don't know a good masseur do you?"

"As a matter of fact, I do."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
EXCELLENT!!!!!

Slow seductive foreplay. Ending made me imagine the next scenario. Very erotic indeed!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Excellent story!!

The ending was fine, don't listen to those other dudes.

bob_socketbob_socketover 13 years agoAuthor
Response to feedback

Thanks for the constructive feedback people.

I don't think that I "ran out of steam" at the end but I do agree that I didn't spend as much time formulating the end as I did with the rest of the story. I'm pleased that someone agreed with my intention of leaving the reader hanging a little that was my intention.

I didn't want a "and they lived happily ever after" end as I thought that would be a bit cheesy. I think I left the door open for more and it seems that you want more so I will start working on the next chapter.

I think I've got an idea as to what will happen next so watch this space.

BenLongBenLongover 13 years ago
perfect

Nah, Bob - a perfect ending. Leave them wanting more, imagining more. Possible sequel? You bet. But any more changes it from an erotic story to a wank novel. Well done.

LolitaXXXLolitaXXXover 13 years ago

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmore please!

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