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At which point Connie sat up, (incidentally dumping Lauren off the bed). Her voice was a little shocked to say the least.
"Mrs. Taylor?"
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puncturealmost 12 years agoGreat story. Really liked the last few lines. Nothing llike surprising people
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This does not mean I am not enjoying the stories. I am enjoying them and can't wait to see what happens next.
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