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"Would she want Primross to bite the girls though?" Elle raises a good point.
"Keeping it in the family?" Ruby shrugs.
Jack decides to break things up, "Okay people. Lots of guesses and no certainty. It's getting late. Gaicazar? With this knowledge is it safe to say we need to keep Sabbath alive? If she is Eve or Adam reborn would God want you to kill her? Him?"
Studying Jack, Gaicazar sheaths his sword.
"Perhaps not." He then extends a hand to assist Sabbath to her feet. Elle still holding her other hand, "If you are the true First of Humanity you are under my protection. Return to your shelter. War is coming. I will fight for you."
Sabbath takes everything in while she can. Once her Vampire cells return, her mind would be an open book to Mother. In this human form the psychic connection severed. Phased back within the cargo container Madigan and Elle bid farewell. As Sabbath returns to her undead persona she opts to meditate. She hoped to avoid Mother. For Lily's sake.
Jack starts barking orders to reinforce their defenses everyone parts to do their bit. Gaicazar standing his ground in thought. Like a statue he had much to ponder. Ruby steps up to Jack conferring over all that they had seen and heard.
"Are we buying all of this?" She exhales dramatically.
Jack turns to face her directly, "I'm more concerned over you having two souls in one body."
"Don't remind me. God I don't want super powers."
"Ruby?" He scowls, "Don't be naïve."
"What?" She looks confused.
"Indigestion?" He brings up.
Her eyes narrow a moment then flare wide, "Oh shit."
Nobody, even Antonaeus Gaicazar noticed a lone rabbit eating from the crops. Until Ruby turned away to hide her emotions. Seeing the rabbit she weeps.
"You guys tried to tell me. Didn't you?"
The rabbit rears up on it's hind legs and acknowledges her notice. Lettuce in paws it merely chews its bites. Nothing more.
Ruby headed back inside.
"Why me?"
- COMMENTS
SZENSEI9 months agoAuthorPATIENCE Hawk. The Fairie shows up again later and is a main character. This is a HUGE world we live on and over millions of years quite a few folks did go missing and could have ended up in PANGAEA. I'll ask you to suspend beliefs on occasion this is a fantasy story as much as SYFY.
nighthawk222049 months agoWe still have other incidental characters unexplained (the faire, maybe others whom I have already forgotten) and now an imposing, immortal, sword waving, Greek speaking, Christian Roman Centurion? It's uncertain whether he has been timewarped in directly from the 1st century or any time thereafter? His only questions are about translator collars and nude maidens.
SZENSEIabout 1 year agoAuthorI don't quite know how to reply to this. LOL! I'm hardly a Historian and like me I'm sure 70% of my readers are in the same boat. We can only go with what we know, have heard in church, or what we've read on our own time. So, all I can say is thank you for opening my eyes to this. I can't say I'd incorporate a lot of what you've suggested mainly because I barely understood it. LOL! No offense I'm not mocking you at all, I'm just saying my comprehension scale can't keep up. I only write how I see it. How the majority of the world likely sees it. If I did all that research, I'd lose my mind. I do find what you've enlightened me with intriguing though. Definitely Thank You. Sorry if I'm naive. Tell me though, does my mistakes take away the thrill of the series itself? I rarely get complaints on this series. The consensus has mostly been positive outside of say military armament errors such as planes, or guns, or the like. The history part that you bring up is a first. Anyways, thanks for caring enough to nudge me in the right direction.
Zen
Grokerabout 1 year agoThe amateur attempt to find supporting evidence in scripture for the fantasy story is suffering from a lack of knowledge of how scripture was written/ evolved...Moses didn't write in English and certainly didn't write "Eve". He wrote the hebrew letters Cheth Vav Hei, which are not the same forwards and backwards...It is pronounced kind of like "khava", but the kh is more of a harsh h than a sharp k (and is more often spelled "Chava" but I didn't want anyone thinking it sounded like the ch in church)
SZENSEIabout 6 years agoAuthorStrangely I hadn't noticed the overuse of pucker. My bad. Thanks for pointing it out. After the finale in Chapter 100 I plan on going back and freshening up the early episodes. Glad you enjoy my efforts. Lots more to come. Writing Chapter 84 this weekend. Keep in touch.
Zen
