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Finally he turned and left with Natasha, his stomach still in knots. They would leave the town within a day and the BadgerKing would never find them.
And that made a hole in Scott somewhere deep inside.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoAnon 15 yars ago,
Go be a worthless trash and watch your porn collection 24/7 then, you social recluse. I bet that you will be forever alone because of how you can't function without all that sex in your mind.
The other anons 15 years ago,
Imagine giving this pathetic "feedback." What's wrong with the writer trying out a new story aspect? Doing the hacker approach does not mean the writer advocates hacking. Now, look what you did. The writer is now gone from this website because of your awful "don't write like this" comments when all three of you are posting as anons that never wrote in their lives nor do they have the confidence to be criticized as well. Pathetic.
sm1982over 9 years agoI had guessed that Duke would get conned out of his share but right after that statuette was taken..like, how was he going to get paid. I wasn't put off by the hacking subplot..doesn't bother me when it's fiction.
Can't wait to see whether or not Scott returns or Duke will be able to track them down. He is afterall, the BadgerKing!
nuckin1futsnixabout 10 years agoi loved it though some parts, only a few, were hard to follow and had to be read over before i got it. You need an editor my dear.But good job great work.
Anonymousover 15 years agoi've read all your submissions, and i'm coming back for seconds!! i think your stories are great. please, dont get discouraged by any negative comments- as long as you keep writing i'll keep reading.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoYou created a first rate story. It needs more sex to be listed as Gay Male. Perhaps as a submission in the Non-Erotic section or something. I really did enjoy it though. The action was first rate.
