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AmMacho
AmMacho
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"And how is that?" Joe asked confused.

"You will Join My Special Ops," The General said.

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Anonymous2 months ago
beginning

This is only a beginning story but in no way a complete intro.

arrowglassarrowglass6 months ago

Would like to read more!!!

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBody8 months ago

Idea is good. You just need to let sentences flow better. It is all quite stilted.

deathshark01deathshark018 months ago
Great start

Great job so far I am looking forward to the next chapter

SlofredSlofred8 months ago

This is a very interesting start. I am looking forward to the story as it develops. A couple of minor grammar errors but over all a solid 5

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