Fire in the Night Ch. 08

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He nodded, still smiling as he pulled away from the rest area. Heading toward town, he found the road that the Walmart was on easily. At a red light, he turned to Caitlin and smiled fondly at her. "Are you excited to see State College, baby?"

She nodded, her green eyes flashing bright. "Very much so!"

He took a moment to admire her flawless skin -- she hadn't even had to put on makeup to look as beautiful as she did. 'I'm glad...makeup would cover up those adorable freckles,' he thought to himself.

Turning his attention back to the road, he watched the light turn green. He stepped on the accelerator.

He didn't even see the truck that ran the red light coming. The sound of the vehicle smashing into the cab of the RV was deafening, and before he even realized what was happening, Jack was thrown against the driver's side window. Before his ears even had time to stop ringing, he realized that the truck had struck the passenger side of the RV. With horror, he turned his eyes to the passenger seat.

To be continued...

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What are you doing to us?

You are writing one heck of a story. You seem to be getting better as you go on. The tension and emotion are draining, but worth it. I can't wait for the next installment. Stay with your writing, because you are very talented.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Work !

The charecters are believable, the action great. But going from cliff hanger to cliff hanger is torture. Next installment please !

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