First Love Hopeful Ch. 01

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"I feel the same way and there are so many things that I want to ask you. My intentions were to stay up all night talking and seeing how our lives match up." I felt her squeeze me gently. "I am looking for something long-term and I want to be sure we are at the same point in our lives. I am sorry if I sound too serious. As I said, those were my intentions. I would still like to do that at some point, but right now, I feel like I am going to fall asleep in the next hour."

"I don't have anything to do in the morning so you can sleep right here, all night, if you would like to."

"Thank you for offering. There is something else."

"I am worried now but don't hold anything back," I said.

"I almost didn't want to say anything. I didn't know if you just wanted to make a nice gesture or if I should think you are crazy."

"I hope this isn't about the fact that I put your address into my GPS. I just thought it would be easier."

"No, that is not it."

"Please don't make me wait any longer. I am worried this is something major I did and I am not even aware of it."

"I would like to know why 'I love you.' is written on the mirror in your bathroom in what appears to be lipstick.

My heart dropped when she asked me about something I was unaware of. Many ideas flashed through my head and the only thing I could reason was that the message on my mirror was due to my recent house guest. "There is something I have to tell you," I said.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Haha! Great ending!

Climatic...I was biting my nails until the end. Where's part two?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
But The Ending

This was as close to perfect as anything here can be. Your sex is powerful, dominating, the way you had her on your sofa, then when you carried the young woman into your bedroom, I was hooked and I wanted her to be me. I wanted to read so much what you did the next day as instead part of what you did once you put her down on your bed... It was so hot I had to come before reading onward.

You've got to write a sequel. Please. For me.

AnomolousCowherdAnomolousCowherdover 13 years ago
Abandoned?

I really enjoyed the story - hope it hasn't been abandoned!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
B U S T ED !

Ohhhh She's So Busted - But I Believe That She'll "CUM" Clean & Honest & Things Will Work Out. After All It's "Their" First Date & Soemtimes Things Happen.

I LOVE IT ! Please Continue

Kathy

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago

Loved It. Please continue. You have a good premise and I want to know what will happen next with your characters.

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