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Rose raised an eyebrow. "I'll tolerate singular 'they' if you insist, but I like 'she' and 'her' better."
"That's what I figured, but I didn't want to assume!"
"I suppose that you have a lot of questions, huh?" Rose didn't like those kinds of questions, but she would answer them for Lilly's sake.
"About what, dear?"
Rose blinked. "About... Well, about what you saw. About me."
"I only have one question." Allison looked at Lilly. "Does she make you happy?"
Lilly looked surprised, but her answer came without the slightest bit of hesitation. "More than anyone I've ever met."
Both of Lilly's parents smiled. "That's all we need to know," said Kenji.
"So... No questions about my body?"
"Your body is your own business. That's between you and Yuriko."
"Oh."
A laugh. "You sound almost disappointed."
"It's just that there are always questions whenever somebody finds out about... Me."
"And I'm sure that you're sick and tired of them."
"God yes."
"Then we won't needle you with any more!"
"So," said Lilly, "you two don't mind that I'm..." She trailed off. Her parents just looked at her. "I mean, labels are kind of a chore, but if you want one I guess I'm bi?"
"Yuriko, of course that doesn't bother us," said Kenji. "You're our daughter. We love you no matter who you are, and no matter who you love."
"Although we're a little concerned that you felt like you couldn't tell us. How long have you known?"
"Uh... I guess I realized it when I was... Fifteen, sixteen, maybe?"
Kenji and Allison looked at each other worriedly. "Seven years is a long time to keep that inside. What did we do that made you think that we wouldn't be supportive?"
"Nothing! I mean, it wasn't anything you did. I was just... These things can be hard to figure out sometimes, you know?"
They seemed a little relieved at that. "Of course," said Kenji. "We've said it to you before, but you know that you can talk to us about anything, right?"
"I know, dad."
Rose grinned and nudged Lilly's elbow. "See? Told you."
"So! Rose." Allison smiled and leaned in, her hand on her chin. "You just graduated too, right?"
"Yeah. I got my BA in Engineering, and now I'm looking into applying for grad school, same as her. It's pretty competitive in STEM fields, so I don't know if any of the universities around here will accept me."
"Of course they will," said Lilly. "Your grades are amazing."
"They're alright, I guess. Not the best."
Lilly scoffed. "She's being modest. She graduated with a 3.9 GPA and honors."
"That's really good!" said Kenji.
"And she's trilingual."
"I mean, I guess, technically. My Spanish is really bad. My French is alright though."
"Ah, vous parlez français?" said Allison. "J'ai étudié en Paris depuis un an quand j'avais la même age que vous."
Rose laughed. "You want pendant, not depuis. And you shouldn't vouvoyer me, it's a little strange."
"See?" said Lilly. "She's amazing."
The rest of the dinner continued in much the same manner. Now that they knew that she was dating their daughter, Lilly's parents seemed to take great interest in Rose's life. They asked her questions the whole way through- What are your plans if grad school doesn't work out? How did you become fluent in French? Have you lived in Blanchepierre your entire life? They were perfectly polite, and not once did they ask about what was between her legs.
They talked for hours after they had finished eating, well into the evening, and when it was finally time to go Lilly's mother hugged both of them. "I think that you're a lovely person, Rose, and I think that the two of you make a lovely couple."
When the two of them got into Rose's car, Lilly leaned back and let out a long, relaxed, relieved sigh. "That was about as good as it possibly could have gone. I'm so glad that they like you."
"Of course they like me. I'm amazing."
Lilly laughed. "As soon as we're alone it's no more Miss Modesty, huh?"
"Maybe Malva is rubbing off on me."
"She should be rubbing off on me, not by herself." She laughed again, then leaned over and pulled Rose into a kiss.
"Hey, Lilly?" Rose asked as they pulled out of the parking lot, after they had detangled from each other.
"Hmm?"
"Why do you like it when I call you a cow, and say all those things about your chest when we're roleplaying? It seems like that was basically how Mike bullied you when you were a kid, and you hated it then. What changed?"
"Mike was calling me names in order to hurt me, and also I hated my body at the time, and also I was a kid. You call me names because I asked you to, and only in a very specific, very controlled context where I know that I can ask you to stop at any time, and you will. It's not the same thing. That's not even comparing apples and oranges. That's comparing apples and... I don't know. Dogs, or something."
"Mm. I guess that makes sense. Sort of."
"Speaking of..." Lilly lifted her shirt, and Rose suddenly had a very difficult time focusing on the road. She was wearing a spaghetti-strap tank top underneath it, through which Rose could see that her breasts were bulging slightly out of her bra. "I think the cows are just about ready to be milked." She looked up at Rose, and her big amber eyes seemed to sparkle behind her glasses. "You wanna help?"
"Like you even need to ask. You, uh, should probably put those away until we get home though, otherwise I might end up crashing before we get there."
Lilly laughed, put her shirt back down, and kissed Rose on the cheek. "Drive fast."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI read the first part of this story some time last summer and loved it, but missed this one, probably because it was only tagged "futa" and not "futanari".
So, to remark on the other guys' comments, I want to say that I didn't find this story nearly as confusing as they did. I think it's because I was already familiar with the characters since they were in your earlier story. You can solve that issue by adding a note of clarification at the start of any following stories that says "this is a continuation of my previous stories so you might want to check those out first". Aside from that, don't stress about finding ways to make the RP clearer. I personally enjoy the way they slip in and out of the roleplay, but I don't want to stand in the way of honest improvements so I'm simply gonna say that you should take the suggestions seriously and dismiss the complaints.
And on the story itself, I loved it! ...with some minor remarks. The plot itself is terrific, and I have no objections. The roleplay element is creative and original (to me), and I love the crossover elements. Additionally, I like the characters, and I find myself just the right sort of curious about them. Since the main appeal for me is the futanari elements, it's remarkable that you got me more interested in learning about Lilly's condition than Rose's. I'm actually hoping to learn more about both (with specific details about their conditions if possible) in following stories.
As for the minor remarks... I felt that the sexual content, while good, was a bit lacking. I know from your "Ubei Dau Vave" story that you can write sex scenes super well, so... yeah, just put those skills together. If that's possible. One small piece of advice that might help is that I've noticed you tend to write with a very consistent time scale, in a sense. You don't drag the critical moments out. You write about the same amount for the climaxes as you do for the build-up. And, as an effect, it takes the same amount of time for a reader to read both the build-up and the climax. I find that the best writers tend to give particular attention to the climaxes, giving readers more to read about those moments, which makes them feel longer (in the context of the story, though, it would be more like time slowing down while a character has an internal monologue). I hope that makes sense. Sorry if that's a bit too abstract.
Either way, I realize that it's been several months since this story was written (though quite coincidentally I saw you posted a non-futa story just recently so clearly you're still around) so I hope you're still planning to write more with these characters. I really do like them! (And tag it with "futanari" if you do, please!)
Anonymousover 6 years agoI hate to say it, but I was disappointed. The story had an excellent "in media res" beginning with some interesting characters and promises of some good old fashioned fallen heroine style deprivation.
But everything it had going for it just made the bait and switch that much worse. Have you ever been really into a story when, in the last pages/episodes, you find out it was just a character's dream? That's kind of what I experienced here. It didn't matter that the Lilly and Rose story could've been hot on its own; my palate was already soiled.
Anonymousover 6 years agoI liked it a lot. The title throws the reader for a bit of a loop, but I see how it fits. It's a bit of a fun "bait and switch." The only thing I'd recommend is maybe using italics or some other contrivance when switching between the roleplay and real life, as instead it made me wonder if there was some sort of data error that combined two stories, or perhaps an editing error in namechange from a previous draft.
Otherwise, excellent and fun pacing, and sex positive too! Hooray!
Anonymousover 6 years agoGreat story. Little confusing at some points, mainly with the names, but there was a story and I found it extremely enjoyable. Keep up the good work.
ollraigthover 6 years agoAuthorCare to elaborate? What about the writing style made it difficult and off-putting?
