First Submission

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Hesitant sub learns to please her Dom.
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We had been dating for about four months when he approached me with his proposition. I stared at him in blank confusion as he stated he was a Dominant seeking a submissive. If I had known what he was talking about the look would have been of red faced-shock but being young and naive it instead pushed him to continue.

"I have been in the D/s community for a few years now and find your youthful eagerness what I yearn for in a submissive. His face was animated as he talked. "I wish to train you as my pet." His smile that always made my own smile light up was present and I knew he wanted this badly. I thought back on the incredible sex we had shared as we got to know each other. It was unlike any I've ever experienced since I had been a virgin at 18. Rougher than any man, the cuffs, the spankings, the hair pulling, could this D/s mean more of the same? Cautiously, I asked these questions floating around in my mind. He took my hands into his and explained how he would control me; own me and yes some of these would be involved but so much more.

"Do you trust me? Do you believe I have nothing but your health and wellness in my mind? Do you know you will actually have all the control?" His blue eyes pierced mine as he asked these questions. I leaned back processing this and nodded just a bit. He had always been on me about what I ate or where I went, how often I stayed up too late and how much I drank when I went out with my friends. I always laughed it off saying he was more like a concerned parent but now I understood it was the Dominant in him wanting to control those thing that where not healthy for me. It was some of the things I loved best about him. When I wanted those new expensive shoes, I would think of his disapproving look and how he would say did I need those or groceries? I would put them back and pay my bills and actually feel good about myself and not guilty that I had spent money I didn't have. Then a few days later... Those same shoes would be tucked under his arm all wrapped in a pretty bow for me to open.

In a voice that slightly shook, he asked, "Will you consent and give this a trial run?" Looking at him I realized that yes I did have the control, I could say no and that would be it. He could not force me to be his "pet" only I could say yes. I knew next to nothing about what he was asking of me, yet it intrigued me to no end. I realized that he had already been subtly testing me with the kinky sex and the constant reprimands on the choices I made and I did enjoy it.

"Yes I will try it" I stuttered out to my own shock. The smile that crept into his face was now different stronger and yes, scarier. He stood abruptly from the couch looking down on me. We stayed that way for a minute or two before he said "When your Dominant stands so do you. You never remain siting in his presence unless commanded too." His voice was stern and I felt compelled to spring to my feet blushing. I looked down at my pink painted toes in shame. I had to wonder what if I couldn't be what he wanted; having no idea how to be this thing he had asked me to be. He reached out and placed two fingers under my chin forcing my green eyes to meet his. "Never look down; I want to see those pretty eyes. You are something I cherish, my pet, not my slave." There was compassion in that velvet voice and I couldn't help but smile.

"Now, I want you to go and shower shaving every inch of hair except your head and brows," of course I wouldn't shave my head or brows I thought laughing silently to myself?

"Put on the lilac lotion and dry your hair well. Come back to this spot and kneel before me wearing nothing but your pink bowed heels, taking no more than 23 minutes." As he finished he glanced at his watch and I realized he was timing me. I sped off to do as he had asked; no commanded.

I stripped with haste and barely waited for the water to get warm. Shivering for a moment I leaned against the shower wall and contemplated my new situation. If I wasn't what he wanted would he leave, would that be it? Could I do this thing he wanted so badly? The water grew warmer under my thoughts and I realized I was wasting precious time. I quickly washed and ran a razor over my legs and arm pits. I lingered even more, washing my pussy letting my fingers enjoy the moistness created as I ran my fingers across my lips. Talking myself out of a quick masturbation, I off the shower and stepped out to dry myself. Glancing at the tiny clock I kept above the sink I realized twenty minutes had flown by. I quickly dried my hair and ran to grab my heels. Not being able to find the pink ones with the bow I grabbed a similar pair and dashed down the stairs.

I slowed upon entering the living room. Keeping my eyes raised was difficult as I walked slowly him and kneeled upon the cushion he had placed upon the floor. He was tapping his foot and had a look of impatience on his face

"Do you know how long you took?" His eyes held mine in a never-ending gaze. I shook my head and glanced down again. He quickly reached out and tucked my chin up. "I do not understand a nod, I want an answer."

"Longer then I should have. Sorry I got distracted and couldn't find..." I was abruptly caught off as he waved his hand.

"I do not want to hear excuses." His hand still held my chin and I was unable to do anything but blush a deep red.

"I'm sorry." I expressed with as much sincerest as I could put into it.

"Sir" He said the word in one bite.

"Excuse me?" I was confused by this new man and his new ways.

"You will address me as Sir."

"Oh ok" I said casting around for what I should do next but before anything could come to mind he had pulled me across his lap. A sharp sting accompanied a loud nose and my grunt as he spanked my bottom in one hard slap. I turned in surprise to look at him, reaching around to rub my now extremely sore ass. Another sharp slap on my other cheek and I tried to wiggle from his lap. He held me like iron and I was unsuccessful.

"I will correct you without punishment twice, on the third correction there will be repercussions. You will always address me as Sir, count when I spank you, never cover what is mine and thank me for correcting you, do you understand?" He kept my glaze, his eyes willing me to understand.

"Yes... Sir." I quickly added the Sir on the end and somehow it flowed smoothly from my lips. I thought it a few more times over in my mind... Sir, yes Sir, as you wish Sir.

Smiling, he set me back on the cushion calling me a good girl. A tingle crept across my thighs at this; at the pleasure I felt that I had pleased him.

"Now, rise so I may inspect what is mine." He indicated for me to stand just before him. He poked and prodded at me, running his hands over my legs, my pussy, up my belly and over my breasts. He turned me around and told me to bend and grasp my ankles.

I giggled and turned, keeping my face turned to his as I bent and grasped my ankles with a saying "Yes Sir." He took both hands and slid them between my legs and pushed so that I spread them a bit. "More pet," He said in a soft whisper "spread those ass cheeks so I might get a better view of my asshole"

Blushing I spread my legs till they were farther than my shoulder length and prayed I did not topple forward.

"Mm... nice very nice" His hands moved across my red sore cheeks softly. I felt him pull them apart and suddenly his tongue was in my hole. I moaned a bit as he worked it in and out, licking and suckling it. He had never done that before and by god it felt fabulous. His hand ran up the inside of my thighs and slid in between the petals of my pussy. I gasped as I felt how moist I was from his attention. His thumb found my button and softly ran circles. His tongue once more delved deeper into my asshole as he rubbed and pulled on my clit. My legs began to shake as he drew me closer and closer to an orgasm. I pushed myself back into his mouth wanting more and wiggled against his hand. He stopped for a moment.

"No moving pet" His command turned me on all the more as I strained not to move; to obey his will. The closer I came to the brink the more I could not control the wobble in my legs. When I started to feel the first wave of an orgasm start to roll across my insides, he stopped. I made sounds of frustration and started to turn to demand he let me at his cock. A sharp sting on my ass cheek froze me midway. I turned just my head to look at him.

'Your orgasms are mine to give or take." The bastard smiled. I screamed inside my head take me you asshole! I dared not utter it out load for the sake of my now bruised ass. "Turn and kneel once more." His voice held some amusement but I was not laughing. I turned roughly and slumped down on the cushion, pouting. I made sure to keep my eyes on his letting him know with them that I did not like this game. He smiled and chuckled. Then the Dominant face came over him and I knew I was fucked in a way that would not heal the ache I now had.

"Your hair is not entirely dry, you do not smell like lilac, you missed a spot shaving and the shoes you are wearing are not the ones I commanded. " I groaned a little inside as he listed all the things I had done wrong in such a short time. "You were late and yet you completed only one of the things I commanded - you showered." I said nothing knowing he had not asked for an explanation. My ass throbbed and I shifted trying to find a more comfortable spot that was not forth coming.

"I might have understood your lateness if you had gotten all of my other commands correct." I thought about this and realized this was why he had set such an impossible time. He had wanted to punish me but had given me the option on what. Now instead of just one punishment, I feared I was looking at many.

I said the only thing that came to mind. "I'm sorry you are disappointed in me Sir, I will try harder to be a better pet for you." There, that might be the right thing to say; I thought then added a prayer.

"What should your punishment be... hmm?" he put a hand to his chin and leaned back deep in thought. My eyes widened as I watched him mull over my fate. My pussy ached in need and my ass ached in pain. The mixture was distracting and exotic. I felt myself growing still wetter as I stared at my Sir considering my fate.

"I think one spanking for every minute you were late for starters" he pronounced much to my chagrin. I must have cringed because he added "don't like that my pet?" I shook my head softly and implored him with my eyes. "Good, then perhaps you will learn something. Come here." He raised his hands so that his lap was open. I stared at his thighs and realized I was going to have to make myself lie across there and accept this. I could call it off and walk right now. With a small sigh I rose from my knees and spread myself across his.

"I need to see your eyes, pet" he called to me softly. With tears already glistening in them I turned to meet his eyes. "If you cannot take it you must say red. Do you understand? It will stop entirely if you say red and we will discuss things." The concern was real and deep. I took a deep breath. It was only a spanking. I had felt worse pain stubbing my toe really. It was the anticipation, knowing I was allowing this, that I could have prevented it if I had just not lingered in the shower. I strengthened myself and nodded.

"Yes Sir, I understand and I am ready to take my correction please." I might have whispered it a bit but I said it in its entirety and actually meant it. I kept my head turned towards his, seeing out of the corner of my eyes him raise his arm and felt the sting as he brought it down on a cheek.

My eyes watered but I managed a "one Sir, thank you" and braced for the next. Gripping his knees with my hands to keep from automatically covering my ass I felt his palm rubbing my ass for a moment before the next sting. "Two Sir, thank you" before the next he spread my legs a bit to my surprise inserted a finger quickly into my hole. I gasped in pleasure as he fingered me for a full minute before suddenly pulling it out to lay another spank on my ass. That time it stung but with more pleasure. Again the finger entered me and almost two minutes passed before his palm found my reddened cheeks. Each time I counted and said thank you with more and more meaning until the tenth one and it was almost a scream of ecstasy from me.

"There, there my pet," he crooned "slow down, rest and take inventory of your body." He pulled some lotion from the table behind him. The same lilac he had wanted me to put on. The realization that I would not have been able to find it had I even tried dawned on me. A part of me had wanted to call him out while another yelled at me to remain silent, be a good girl. The soreness spread over my body and I yearned for him to soothing it. I remained silent and still as possible as he lovingly worked the cool lotion across my buttocks with a deep kneading motion. We stayed this way for about ten minutes and I basked in our comfortable silence.

"There now, your time-lapse punishment is all over, that wasn't so bad now was it?" he asked as he gently placed me back on my cushion. I quickly slid on my knees and squirmed to find a place to rest my beaten ass. Oh god there is more I thought to myself and answered him with a no Sir. "List the other corrections for me, I've forgotten." He taps his knee and waits for me to acknowledge my wrong doings.

"Yes Sir. My hair was still wet, I did not properly shave or lotion and my shoes were not to your satisfaction."

"I enjoyed how well you took your last punishment that I will forgive the lotion I think" He mused. I opened my mouth to point out he had taken it and closed it quickly; best not to give him any reason to add more to the list. He watched me flounder like a fish and smiled. I smiled sweetly back and thought fuck you.

"I think for the hair and the unshaven spot I have the perfect thing. Stand on the rug there" He indicated my throw rug in the middle of the living room. I pulled my already sore body up and stumbled a bit as I walked over. He followed me after picking up a canvas bag I had not noticed. He must have gone to his car and retrieved it while I was showering. From it he took out a round black stick about an inch around and three feet long. My eyes widened and my heart beat double time. If he plans on hitting me with that I'm calling red I thought frantically. He saw my reaction and put a reassuring palm against my chest.

"Easy pet, there should be no more spankings this evening unless you force my hand again" he tweaked a nipple and placed the rod against my legs right behind my knee. "bend down a bit and grasp this behind your legs." I did so holding it between the crooks of my legs. He had a hand on my shoulder to help balance me and urged me to put my arms straight out to balance myself. "Now stay there till I say otherwise." He walked off and I teetered a moment to get my balance. I followed his progress back to the couch where he poured himself a glass of wine, sat and observed me. My legs soon began to yell at me telling me to either sit my ass down or stand all the way up. I gritted my teeth and held on. My wall clock was behind me and I tried unsuccessfully to see it.

"Five more minutes pet, such wonderful legs you have, this will certainly help maintain that sexy shape." He sipped away and almost buzzed with excitement as he watched me struggling. I counted slowly to 60 and started over again. I focused on those numbers in my head and let the ache go. The time passed quicker than I thought and he soon told me I may stand. I had some difficulty but managed to lock my knees once more.

He clapped and beckoned me closer to him. He raised his glass, showing that he required a refill. I accommodated him without pouring the bottle over his head and was blessed with a smile and another "good girl" from his lips. He gestured to a glass of water sitting next to the wine bottle and told me to drink all of it up. My thirst came over me and I gulped it down feeling a bit refreshed.

"Thank you Sir" was out of my lips before I could even think to say it. He welcomed me and leaned forward. He slid his hands along my belly and up towards my breasts. A small moan escaped my lips as he tugged on my nipples making them hard and pointed.

"What perfect breast I now own" He cupped it in the palm of his hand, hefting it as if he was testing its weight and running a thumb over the nipple. Reaching into my glass of water he extracted an ice cube and placed it between his lips. His hands wrapped around my body and dug into my ass getting a small gasp of pain from my lips as he pulled me towards him.

"Lean over pet" he commanded through his ice filled lips and I complied. My breasts swayed in front of him and he ran the ice over the nipples. They bobbed and swung as he pushed them one way and another with the cold wetness. I placed my hands on his shoulders and he pulled back looking me in my eyes and I quickly placed them behind my back and stayed still. With a smile he went back to pleasing and teasing my nipples. The ice quickly melted and he added a new one to his mouth. His hand worked its way up to my pussy once more. Feeling my wetness from all the torture he had inflicted on me, he moaned and his fingers slid into me. I closed my eyes and enjoyed the sensations of his warm hands and cold mouth. His strong fingers worked me quickly into frenzy as I stood still moaning softly. One then two fingers caressed me from the inside, sliding slowly in and out working up to my clit to circle it and back sliding softly over and over. When his fingers left my pussy entirely I almost cried.

"Keep your eyes closed pet" he murmured. I sighed as his lips suckled my nipple taking it into his mouth then gasped as a cold sensation slid into my now soaked pussy. He had taken a cube of ice and pushed it up into me, working his warm fingers around it. Another followed and then another, freezing and exciting me.

"Hold those in there till they melt pet." He pulled back and waited a minute before adding another and another until I felt full. I squeezed my keggles together forcing them to stay. I felt him sitting back but did not open my eyes. His gaze was on my body and I felt him smiling at my discomfort. Another cube was added and I strained to hold them all in as they melted. Oh god, he's added another I cursed him in my mind. Yet I held them and he would wait just enough time to add another that they were melting fast and making room. His hot breath was suddenly on my pussy. I felt myself quiver and strained to dig in deeper and do as he commanded. His mouth moved to my pussy, sucking up the water and juices alike. He pushed his tongue inside to pull what ice remained from me. He sucked and tongued me until I was empty of ice and full of his pleasure. His hands grabbed at my ass once more but with his tongue in my hole and his nose working circles on my clit it added to the pleasure overload. All of a sudden I was sitting on the couch and he began to eat me like a starving man. He worked from my petals and down to my asshole and back up again. My hands found his hair as he pinched my clit and I ran my fingers through it putting pressure on his head as his tongue fucked me hard.

"Ready for your last punishment pet?' he asked. He licked his fingers and looked up to me as he slowly slid them in and out waiting for my answer. God at this point as long as he didn't stop I would do anything.

"Yes Sir, Please Sir, Anything" I breathed as I panted throwing my head side to side. He reached back into his bag without missing a stroke in my now dripping pussy. I watched thru half closed eyes as he pulled out an odd shaped dildo. It was smaller at the tip and grew rounder towards the bottom and had a flat flap on the end of the fat bottom. He held it up for me to inspect.

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