That last thought spurred her to action. Not thinking, refusing to think about the consequences, she dropped all pretence at dignity and ran out through the main doors of the hotel. She vowed she would never return!
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Twist
Definitely took me by surprise, nonetheless, still had me intrigued. Yet to determine my appetite on this twist.
Yet again
My crit of the story is deleted despite it being objective.
Sorry, but if you can't accept realistic crit then can I suggest you turn off the comments.
He is a jerk...a blackmailing jerk.
What part of consensual in SSC did this cover ?more...
Great!
I can hardly wait for more!
The mystery character
So Kim is the mystery character you alluded to! I do agree with Masterfuljim that his chapter has more of a non-consent/reluctance feel to it. Now she is running; can I assume that she'll return? Will this be a story inside this story; a parallel story line, or be spun off to a completely separate story between Myles and Kim?more...
Ah, heck!
Some guys have all the luck. . .
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