Andy smiled back at her and a guard told him his time was up.
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Great phone sex
I have always wondered how a new couple would start talking erotically over the phone. This gave me some great ideas
Andy adjusts to jail
I must say I am getting sucked into Andy and Vera now. She visits him in jail, this is getting very interesting. Meanwhile the phone is put to good use and Tracy shows she is a good sport, and a sexy one. But can it last? Ahhhhh, that is why I turn the pages.more...
Better and better...
I really enjoyed Subway Girl so I was delighted to see Flower Girl and I'm loving it so far. The characters are so realistic and interesting, and the story-within-a-story is fascinating (and technically tricky, but you are handling it brilliantly!) Thank you for sharing your talent with us.more...
Nana
Nana's dialogue with Tracy is a treat for this reader.
Nana seems to carry the voice of the author, speaking to her inner child-writer. The nudges and encouragements have that level of connection and intimacy.
Whether or not you are putting the voice of the author into Nana's character, the flow of spirit between her and Tracy is palpable.
Brilliant !more...
dittp
I fully agree with avidfan's comments.
DB, your writing skills and imagineering deserve high praises.
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