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Click here"I'll . . . oh now what?" the Councilman said as some doors outside of the Council chambers slammed and the interior doors opened.
A man and a woman strode into the room with a definite air of authority. Everything from the custom Italian business suits to the embroidered handkerchiefs to the loafers that cost a semester's tuition just to have shined, these two screamed Power Couple with capital letters. He was build like the quintessential college football quarterback, with a few streaks of silver in his otherwise dark hair, but it just added to his allure.
The woman was beautiful to be sure, though she had this look that would have sent Cruella DeVil scurrying for cover. She was lean as a snake, and her rich brown hair flowed halfway down her back. Her adornment was subtle but screamed of wealth and class at the same time. But what Heda noticed first, oddly enough, was the woman's mouth. She had full lips that might normally be kissable, but that mouth was stuck in a borderline sneer, and that looked to be its normal state.
"Mr. Hannity?" the Councilman said.
"Dad?" Alvin let out with a yelp.
"Shit!" was Heda's contribution.
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To be continued . . .
- COMMENTS
FranziskaSissyover 2 years agoIm so taken by your talent to write such intense fabulous telltale .".... Thank you for sharing
bhojoover 3 years ago5 stars again and a cliffhanger :)
My errata as usual
Joanna had gone with blacks and grays, wh => Should this be joanna or Madison ?
letting them slid under her skin => not slid, slide
And Heda seemed please, pushing => not please, pleased
without getting starting a fight." => getting is superfluous
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoIs a douche. It's fucking college. I guess you'd rank Hunter S. Thompson a zero huh?
Anonymousover 11 years agoYour writing itself and creation of the story deserve 5 stars. However, Kevin's unnecessary use of drugs and the lack of initiative of stopping Madison from corrupting herself with Kevin's "creations" bring it down to 3 stars. I completely disapprove of the drug use. Stupid and unnecessary. Otherwise, good job.
