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"She wasn't the traitor, if that's what you mean," Alex said with a serious expression. "From what I heard they..." his voice trailed off. "Well, I better don't even tell you what they did to her," he said finally.

"And the others?"

"Most of them are dead, I reckon," said Alex. "Really, you are lucky you're alive, considering you were the one who plotted the whole kidnapping-thing. But they like you. Especially the president likes you."

"But... Do you mean we have a chance of getting out of here?"

Alex smiled. "You don't get it, do you?" he asked. "The president likes you enough to keep you. And well, I ... I like you too, Lucy. The president was very glad to get you, it made him generous. He gave me a key to your cell."

Lucy stared at him. Alex smiled his friendly smile, the smile she knew from so many meetings. Somehow his words didn't get through to her mind; she just wondered why he kept speaking of the president, rather than the "Toad". Alex was moving closer to her. Closer than Lucy felt comfortable with at the moment. She tried to move to the side, but suddenly Alex' arm was around her shoulders, preventing her from getting away.

"Of course the president and his friends will keep you pretty busy. I was told they are all excited to meet you," he said, still smiling. "You are really very pretty, Lucy. But they have other things to do at times, the president and his friends. That's why they gave me the key. They know how much I like you."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great story

Maybe not your best, but definitely an outstanding story, well developed and followed through.

Best of luck in the contest.

WarriorPrincessUKWarriorPrincessUKabout 16 years ago
Well done, you don't need an editor

Very good as far as it went, but there has to be a part 2 where Lucy & Alex get it together and the Toad finally gets his just deserts. Also, Lucy has to remember what happened when she blacked out.

curiousk75curiousk75about 16 years ago
great work!

an excellent story - nice twist at the end - and despite the absence of an editor there were only a very few minor grammatical errors - please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
ummm

well the idea of a really fat cock is really grows........i wish u had written about what her and Alex did that would have been hot

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